Very good but I hope you weren’t intentionally using the wrong pronoun -
“”her 16 year old pregnant wife””
A frenetic orchestral arrangement of “Carol of the Bells” but musically enjoyable.....by David Foster.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pvHAkxm0Su4
No, I edited the first sentence and forgot to edit it from her to his.
I wish at times we could edit things after we post, but it its what it is.
At least I edited it on my website where the story was posted in full