To: daniel1212
Compare your screed to a newspaper column. The newspaper column is designed for maximum readability. Your amateurish effort isn’t. And I’m reading it on a huge monitor, not a cell phone. Also, lose the yellow background. Learn how to break your paragraphs up. Add white space. In other words...find an editor, or learn to edit.
This MESS is reminiscent of some of the worst “run-on” unformatted postings on FR.
157 posted on
08/04/2019 12:50:22 PM PDT by
Wonder Warthog
(The Hog of Steel and NRA Life Member)
To: Wonder Warthog
Compare your screed to a newspaper column. The newspaper column is designed for maximum readability. Your amateurish effort isn’t. And I’m reading it on a huge monitor, not a cell phone. Also, lose the yellow background. Learn how to break your paragraphs up. Add white space. In other words...find an editor, or learn to edit. This MESS is reminiscent of some of the worst “run-on” unformatted postings on FR. Which is much biased bombast in lieu of an actual argument, from a member of a church no less whose online prolix papal encyclicals are actually hard to read, some with approx. 100 word run-on sentences, 400+ word paragraphs, and up to over 25,000 words - and could use some color.
158 posted on
08/04/2019 2:26:14 PM PDT by
daniel1212
( Trust the risen Lord Jesus to save you as a damned and destitute sinner + be baptized + follow Him)
To: Wonder Warthog
The newspaper column is designed for maximum readability.And minimum understandability most of the time.
159 posted on
08/04/2019 4:42:11 PM PDT by
Elsie
(Heck is where people, who don't believe in Gosh, think they are not going...)
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