I think the article points out the flaws in your thinking.
One of which is that we must think with the mind of the Church(the Pope, Bishops,Magisterium) and not use apparitions to pronounce our judgement on the Church. The church pronounces judgement on apparitions.
Your thinking is a form of populism against the church.
Which is not to say that your thinking is the dominant view, it isnt.
It’s not necessarily my thinking that the Church should have followed to the letter what Mary requested, but I have wondered about it. I was mostly interested to hear what your take was on it; if you agreed with the article, etc. Thanks!