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To: dirtboy

dang, six syllables in that last line. Oh well, I still like it...

12 posted on 09/21/2001 8:13:14 AM PDT by dirtboy

To: dirtboy

Not so easy, is it! We southerners draw out words. So noise is two syllables down here.

15 posted on 09/21/2001 8:14:19 AM PDT by Sir Gawain

To: dirtboy, all

Updated:

Bin Laden smiling
He hears a noise from above
Pretty mushroom cloud

17 posted on 09/21/2001 8:15:27 AM PDT by Sir Gawain

To: dirtboy

The extra syllable was worth it. Priceless.......

25 posted on 09/21/2001 8:19:13 AM PDT by dubyagee

To: dirtboy

Suggested revision (to fit 5-7-5 scheme):

Note to Bin Laden
The next cruise missile will hit
Butt not a camel's.

46 posted on 09/21/2001 8:40:21 AM PDT by Verginius Rufus

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