Thanks. It definitely could use some editing. As I said, it was in the early years of my writing. My writing has improved immensely since then.
When I shared it to the newspaper I used to blog with, it was one of the top 100 topics discussed on the WWW.
Sadly I never again achieved such fame. I feel like Billy Ray Cyrus did about Aichy Breaky Heart. He hated that song, and sadly, he never again had a song achieve the fame again which he got from it.