[mia]

Oh my goodness, this writer sounds like she is writing a novel. Give me a break, who wants to hear about the interior of his car and his shoes, etc. Why doesn’t she tell us what he was thinking.... yikes, but this is bad reporting.

[Red Badger]

I call it “Hemingway” reporting.............

[babble-on]

yes, the overcooked writing is horrible.

[Bogey78O]

Every reporter dreams of winning a Pulitzer for their Great American novel they Peck out about some news event.

Imagine if they did this in regards to Pearl Harbor. The war would have ended before we found out what happened.

[Sans-Culotte]

Oh my goodness, this writer sounds like she is writing a novel. Give me a break, who wants to hear about the interior of his car and his shoes, etc. Why doesn’t she tell us what he was thinking.... yikes, but this is bad reporting.

"It was a dark and stormy night."

[wardaddy]

Hey Mia

My first thought was Hemingway in lingerie or mascara

This writer is so incredibly gay it’s painful

He writes like he had a priapism the whole time

[IronJack]

That was my impression too. Save the hyperbole and backstory nonsense for your screenwriting class. Report the story and leave the rest to Hemingway.