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FReeper Canteen ~ The Lighthouse Test ~ 01 August 2012
Serving The Bestest Troops and Veterans In The World !! | The Canteen Crew

Posted on 07/31/2012 6:00:20 PM PDT by Kathy in Alaska

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To: HiJinx

MINE


101 posted on 08/01/2012 9:06:32 AM PDT by tomkow6 (...................TOMKOW6 ! The ONLY voice of reason & sanity in a chaotic Canteen!...............)
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To: tomkow6; Old Sarge
MINE

Now then, where are those pesky seagulls....?

102 posted on 08/01/2012 9:23:07 AM PDT by HiJinx (He who controls the water, controls life.)
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To: beachn4fun

((LOL)) :-D


103 posted on 08/01/2012 9:42:59 AM PDT by E.G.C.
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To: HiJinx
wh!!

Thanks, unique, for the Elmo!!

HJ.....#95!!


104 posted on 08/01/2012 10:18:51 AM PDT by Kathy in Alaska (((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
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To: beachn4fun

Good for you! :)


105 posted on 08/01/2012 10:18:59 AM PDT by luvie (Never forget...WE have THEM surrounded! ~ Rush Limbaugh)
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To: tomkow6; HiJinx

106 posted on 08/01/2012 10:23:21 AM PDT by Old Sarge (We are now officially over the precipice, we just havent struck the ground yet)
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To: E.G.C.

Good afternoon, E...((HUGS))...wishing you a break in the heat. Sending a prayer for rain and no fires.

You and Bo have a good Wednesday.


107 posted on 08/01/2012 11:00:06 AM PDT by Kathy in Alaska (((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
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To: E.G.C.

Good afternoon, E...((HUGS))...wishing you a break in the heat. Sending a prayer for rain and no fires.

You and Bo have a good Wednesday.


108 posted on 08/01/2012 11:48:49 AM PDT by Kathy in Alaska (((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
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To: beachn4fun

Happy Wednesday!!!!!!! ((HUGS))


109 posted on 08/01/2012 12:01:28 PM PDT by Kathy in Alaska (((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
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To: Arrowhead1952

Thanks for breakfast, Arrowhead...((HUGS))...and have a good jury duty day.


110 posted on 08/01/2012 1:14:43 PM PDT by Kathy in Alaska (((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
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To: Kathy in Alaska

Thanks Kathy!

{{HUGS}}


111 posted on 08/01/2012 2:35:38 PM PDT by blackie (Be Well~Be Armed~Be Safe~Molon Labe!)
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To: HiJinx
95!!! Woo-Hoo, I got it!!!

ROTFLOL

112 posted on 08/02/2012 5:29:22 AM PDT by beachn4fun (Losing our FReedom, one ban at a time.)
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To: HiJinx
You have any more books in progress? Hooked was a nice read.

You read the book? It's nice to have feedback.

Actually I am on the last (fingers crossed) edit of book one in a five book series.

And I do have several others on the back burner...which I will return to after getting started on re-write on book two (I have 3 1/2 of the 5 done but will have to make some changes). Learning as I go.

113 posted on 08/02/2012 5:34:37 AM PDT by beachn4fun (Losing our FReedom, one ban at a time.)
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To: beachn4fun

I am impressed! And it does sound a lot like work, doesn’t it? I used to write for a living - technical stuff - and know how frustrating it can be to remain consistent after a dozen rewrites. Hang in there, a good editor will keep you straight!

And yes, I did read Hooked. The ending was pretty much a foregone conclusion, but I liked the way you brought the reader there.


114 posted on 08/02/2012 7:46:43 AM PDT by HiJinx (He who controls the water, controls life.)
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To: HiJinx

Thanks for the feedback. I do want my stories to be about the main character so well after it’s been read one feels they know that “person”.

I always say that the writing is the easiest part. Getting it ready for publication is another story.

I felt bad when I discovered after umpteen corrections that there were still a couple of missed words...until I noticed the same in seasoned authors...so I try not to be too hard on myself.


115 posted on 08/02/2012 7:59:00 AM PDT by beachn4fun (Losing our FReedom, one ban at a time.)
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To: beachn4fun

**chuckle**

FReepers read Typo, don’cha know!


116 posted on 08/02/2012 9:54:19 AM PDT by HiJinx (He who controls the water, controls life.)
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