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FReeper Canteen ~ The Lighthouse Test ~ 01 August 2012
Serving The Bestest Troops and Veterans In The World !!
| The Canteen Crew
Posted on 07/31/2012 6:00:20 PM PDT by Kathy in Alaska
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To: HiJinx
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posted on
08/01/2012 9:06:32 AM PDT
by
tomkow6
(...................TOMKOW6 ! The ONLY voice of reason & sanity in a chaotic Canteen!...............)
To: tomkow6; Old Sarge
MINE Now then, where are those pesky seagulls....?
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posted on
08/01/2012 9:23:07 AM PDT
by
HiJinx
(He who controls the water, controls life.)
To: beachn4fun
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posted on
08/01/2012 9:42:59 AM PDT
by
E.G.C.
To: HiJinx
104
posted on
08/01/2012 10:18:51 AM PDT
by
Kathy in Alaska
(((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
To: beachn4fun
105
posted on
08/01/2012 10:18:59 AM PDT
by
luvie
(Never forget...WE have THEM surrounded! ~ Rush Limbaugh)
To: tomkow6; HiJinx
106
posted on
08/01/2012 10:23:21 AM PDT
by
Old Sarge
(We are now officially over the precipice, we just havent struck the ground yet)
To: E.G.C.
Good afternoon, E...((HUGS))...wishing you a break in the heat. Sending a prayer for rain and no fires.
You and Bo have a good Wednesday.
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posted on
08/01/2012 11:00:06 AM PDT
by
Kathy in Alaska
(((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
To: E.G.C.
Good afternoon, E...((HUGS))...wishing you a break in the heat. Sending a prayer for rain and no fires.
You and Bo have a good Wednesday.
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posted on
08/01/2012 11:48:49 AM PDT
by
Kathy in Alaska
(((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
To: beachn4fun
Happy Wednesday!!!!!!! ((HUGS))
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posted on
08/01/2012 12:01:28 PM PDT
by
Kathy in Alaska
(((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
To: Arrowhead1952
Thanks for breakfast, Arrowhead...((HUGS))...and have a good jury duty day.
110
posted on
08/01/2012 1:14:43 PM PDT
by
Kathy in Alaska
(((~RIP Brian...the Coast Guard lost a good one.~)))
To: Kathy in Alaska
111
posted on
08/01/2012 2:35:38 PM PDT
by
blackie
(Be Well~Be Armed~Be Safe~Molon Labe!)
To: HiJinx
95!!! Woo-Hoo, I got it!!!ROTFLOL
112
posted on
08/02/2012 5:29:22 AM PDT
by
beachn4fun
(Losing our FReedom, one ban at a time.)
To: HiJinx
You have any more books in progress? Hooked was a nice read.You read the book? It's nice to have feedback.
Actually I am on the last (fingers crossed) edit of book one in a five book series.
And I do have several others on the back burner...which I will return to after getting started on re-write on book two (I have 3 1/2 of the 5 done but will have to make some changes). Learning as I go.
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posted on
08/02/2012 5:34:37 AM PDT
by
beachn4fun
(Losing our FReedom, one ban at a time.)
To: beachn4fun
I am impressed! And it does sound a lot like work, doesn’t it? I used to write for a living - technical stuff - and know how frustrating it can be to remain consistent after a dozen rewrites. Hang in there, a good editor will keep you straight!
And yes, I did read Hooked. The ending was pretty much a foregone conclusion, but I liked the way you brought the reader there.
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posted on
08/02/2012 7:46:43 AM PDT
by
HiJinx
(He who controls the water, controls life.)
To: HiJinx
Thanks for the feedback. I do want my stories to be about the main character so well after it’s been read one feels they know that “person”.
I always say that the writing is the easiest part. Getting it ready for publication is another story.
I felt bad when I discovered after umpteen corrections that there were still a couple of missed words...until I noticed the same in seasoned authors...so I try not to be too hard on myself.
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posted on
08/02/2012 7:59:00 AM PDT
by
beachn4fun
(Losing our FReedom, one ban at a time.)
To: beachn4fun
**chuckle**
FReepers read Typo, don’cha know!
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posted on
08/02/2012 9:54:19 AM PDT
by
HiJinx
(He who controls the water, controls life.)
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