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I wrote this. I wonder if it's any good? It's a Doctor Seuss-kinda thing. Wish I could draw the characters!
1 posted on 11/17/2010 7:49:11 AM PST by Lazamataz
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Here is the finished product. Post away on your forum!


2 posted on 11/17/2010 7:50:41 AM PST by Lazamataz (Pelosi: Like a rapist, PROUD of their handiwork.)
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That’s great Laz! I love it!


3 posted on 11/17/2010 7:52:51 AM PST by Still Thinking (Freedom is NOT a loophole!)
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Excellent,Laz! You are quite the poet.....Dr Seuss would be proud!


4 posted on 11/17/2010 7:53:12 AM PST by gimme1ibertee ("In a time of universal deceit,telling the truth becomes a revolutionary act"-George Orwell)
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It feels more like Alice in Wonderland prose than Dr. Suess

But that is no criticism- I liked it


6 posted on 11/17/2010 7:54:41 AM PST by Mr. K (TSA Sexual Assaulters: "You dont get on until we get off")
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You wonder if it’s any good? It’s great!!!


7 posted on 11/17/2010 7:55:04 AM PST by PatriotGirl827 (Lord Jesus, direct my mind, possess my heart, transform my life)
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A little Seuss-ian humor.


8 posted on 11/17/2010 7:56:47 AM PST by Lazamataz (Pelosi: Like a rapist, PROUD of their handiwork.)
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Good work Laz!!


9 posted on 11/17/2010 7:58:10 AM PST by theDentist (fybo; qwerty ergo typo : i type, therefore i misspelll)
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IF ANYONE IS AN ARTIST AND CAN DRAW DOCTOR-SEUSS-LIKE CHARACTERS, we can combine efforts and produce a wonderful composition.
10 posted on 11/17/2010 7:59:57 AM PST by Lazamataz (Pelosi: Like a rapist, PROUD of their handiwork.)
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LOL. I like it a lot.

Hiding political messages in children's rhymes is part of a great tradition.

11 posted on 11/17/2010 8:00:56 AM PST by Upstate NY Guy (Gen 15:16 The iniquity of the Amorite is not yet complete.)
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Good stuff.

When can we expect to see a poem about the ‘Barniphranc’?


12 posted on 11/17/2010 8:00:59 AM PST by WayneS (Enlightened statesmen will not always be at the helm. -- James Madison)
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That’s awesome. Good work.


14 posted on 11/17/2010 8:04:36 AM PST by cweese (Hook 'em Horns!!!)
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A little Doctor-Seuss-y humor.


15 posted on 11/17/2010 8:05:35 AM PST by Lazamataz (Pelosi: Like a rapist, PROUD of their handiwork.)
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I hope you don’t mind, I’m sending it to friends. I loved it.


16 posted on 11/17/2010 8:06:14 AM PST by Bitsy
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To: Lazamataz

Oh, and characters would be a GREAT addition.


17 posted on 11/17/2010 8:07:09 AM PST by Bitsy
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I wonder if it's any good?

You impressed me, if that means anything.

18 posted on 11/17/2010 8:07:32 AM PST by freespirited (This tagline dedicated to the memory of John Armor, a/k/a Congressman Billybob.)
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A little Doctor-Seuss-y humor.


19 posted on 11/17/2010 8:07:32 AM PST by Lazamataz (Pelosi: Like a rapist, PROUD of their handiwork.)
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Reading the Glassy Word Boards.

I love, love, love it, Laz! It's great! Thanks for making me smile.

20 posted on 11/17/2010 8:07:37 AM PST by MaggieCarta (What are we here for but to provide sport for our neighbors, and to laugh at them in our turn?Austen)
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It is MOST EXCELLENT, my FRiend!....................


21 posted on 11/17/2010 8:08:15 AM PST by Red Badger (The House finally fell on Nancy Pelosi..........)
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Good work Laz. Having young ones around the house can be inspirational.

I think you should publish this, with drawings (as another poster suggested) so conservatives have good bedtime book to read to their kids!


23 posted on 11/17/2010 8:09:55 AM PST by PhiloBedo (You gotta roll with the punches and get with what's real.)
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Brilliant! Hope it gets around the ‘net.


25 posted on 11/17/2010 8:11:14 AM PST by bigbob
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