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To: redk
Great article.
She needs just a bit of editorial help, but she did fine.

“many states have abundant coal whose technology -—”???

I am not being hyper critical, very few doctors, attorneys or successful business people can write worth a darn.

89 posted on 07/13/2009 9:29:51 PM PDT by Kansas58
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To: Kansas58

True, a goof in grammar there. What I like is how my eye flowed over the whole essay—what I call “coherence”—with nary a bump or confusion. Thought moving easily to the next thought. That made me not copy-edit. But, that is an error.


100 posted on 07/13/2009 9:36:10 PM PDT by Mamzelle (OBAMA MIND TRICK)
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To: Kansas58
Whatever editorial help she needs was minor compared to the succinct way she turned a couple of key phrases:

The ironic beauty in this plan? Soon, even the most ardent liberal will understand supply-side economics....

Can America produce more of its own energy through strategic investments that protect the environment, revive our economy and secure our nation?

Yes, we can. Just not with Barack Obama's energy cap-and-tax plan.

Pretty Dang Great....

103 posted on 07/13/2009 9:38:18 PM PDT by freebilly
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To: Kansas58

that’s the only grammatical error that jumped out at me-—it’s not huge and I’m incredibly nit-picky.


150 posted on 07/13/2009 10:30:31 PM PDT by SallyH ( wit)
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