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To: Kansas58

True, a goof in grammar there. What I like is how my eye flowed over the whole essay—what I call “coherence”—with nary a bump or confusion. Thought moving easily to the next thought. That made me not copy-edit. But, that is an error.


100 posted on 07/13/2009 9:36:10 PM PDT by Mamzelle (OBAMA MIND TRICK)
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To: Mamzelle

She has a natural gift.
A cadence to her writing that allows you to hear her voice, as you read it.


111 posted on 07/13/2009 9:52:12 PM PDT by Kansas58
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