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Loose lips sink sequels (Dave Barry)
Miami Herald ^ | DAVE BARRY

Posted on 03/04/2007 11:33:54 AM PST by nuconvert

Loose lips sink sequels

BY DAVE BARRY

(This classic Dave Barry column was originally published May 31, 1998.)

I finally finished the script for the sequel to the movie ''Titanic.'' I am calling it -- and let the legal record show that I thought of this first -- ``Titanic II: The Sequel.''

I am darned proud of this script. I have been working on it, without sleeping or eating, except for two grilled cheese sandwiches, for the better part of the last 35 minutes. I realize that sounds like a lot of work, but bear in mind that writer/director James Cameron spent nearly twice that long on the script for the original movie, which was titled ``Titanic I: The Original Movie.''

As you know, ''Titanic I'' garnered a record 56 Academy Awards, including Best Major Motion Picture Lasting Longer Than Both O.J. Trials Combined; Most Total Water; Most Realistic Scene Of Bodies Falling Off The End Of A Sinking Ship And Landing On Big Ship Parts With A Dull Clonking Sound; and Most Academy Awards Garnered. The movie has made a huge star out of Leonardo DiCaprio, who has shown the world that he is not just a pretty face; he is a pretty face who, if he had been in my high school, would have spent a lot of time being held upside-down over the toilet by larger boys.

The phenomenal success of ''Titanic I'' also has served as an elegant rebuttal to the critics of writer/director Cameron, although this has not prevented him from going around Hollywood physically hitting these critics on the head with his Oscar statuette. Cameron was especially angry at Los Angeles Times film critic Kenneth Turan, who said Cameron's writing was trite and devoid of subtlety; this prompted Cameron to take out a full-page newspaper ad saying, quote, ''Bite me.'' I certainly don't want to take sides in this issue, other than to say that James Cameron is easily the most talented human being in world history including Michelangelo and Shakespeare and all four Beatles combined. I say this out of a sincere desire to have Mr. Cameron pay a hefty sum for my script for ''Titanic II: The Sequel.'' Here it is:

(The movie opens with the Titanic II getting ready to sail. As the ship's horn blasts a mighty departure toot, up runs spunky young Jack Dawson, played by Leonardo DiCaprio. There is seaweed on him.)

JACK: Whew! I just made it!

ROSE: Jack! I thought you had drowned! To death!

JACK: No! Fortunately, the bitter North Atlantic cold was unable to penetrate my protective layer of hair gel! Who are you?

ROSE: I'm Rose! Remember? You gave your life for me in ``Titanic I.''

JACK: But Rose was played by Kate Winslet!

ROSE: She didn't want to be in another movie with you, because your cheekbones are so much higher! So the part went to me, Demi Moore!

JACK: Whatever.

(The scene shifts to the ship's bridge.)

CAPTAIN: Ahoy, First Mate! Commence starboard computer animation! Full speed ahead!

FIRST MATE: Sir! We're getting reports of gigantic icebergs directly ahead! Shouldn't we go slow?

CAPTAIN: Don't be silly! What are the chances that we're going to hit another ...

(There is a loud crunching sound. Big pieces of ice come through the window, along with several penguins.)

CAPTAIN: Dang!

FIRST MATE: Sir! The computerized sinking animation has commenced! (The scene shifts to the Poop Deck, where the water is rising fast. Jack and Rose are helping women and children into a lifeboat, when an evil villain appears with a gun.)

VILLAIN: Out of the way! I'm taking this lifeboat all for myself!

JACK: It's Kenneth Turan, film critic for the Los Angeles Times!

TURAN: That's right, and I shall stop at nothing to get off this ship, because the dialogue is terrible!

JACK: Is not!

TURAN: Is too!

(They commence fighting.)

THE LATE BURGESS MEREDITH: You can do it, Rock! Watch out for the jab!

JACK: Hey! You're in the wrong sequel!

MEREDITH: Sorry!

(This distraction enables Turan, by cheating, to gain the upper hand.)

TURAN: I have gained the upper hand! Whatever that expression means! And now, pretty boy, I'm going to ... OHMIGOD! NOOO! (Turan is torn into raisin-sized pieces by an irate horde of young female Leonardo DiCaprio fans.)

JACK: Whew! That was close! Uh-oh! The ship is almost done sinking!

ROSE: This is it! I hope I don't end up as an old bag in this movie! (As the two lovers start to slip beneath the icy cold computerized waves, they embrace. There is a cracking sound.)

JACK: You broke my ribs!

ROSE: Sorry! I have tremendous upper-body strength since starring in ``G.I. Jane''!

JACK: Don't worry! As long as my cheekbones are OK! (The water slowly closes over them. In the distance, we hear two crew members on a lifeboat, looking for survivors.)

FIRST CREW MEMBER: What's that sound coming from over there?

SECOND CREW MEMBER: It sounds like ... Oh my God! It's Celine Dion!

FIRST CREW MEMBER: Let's get out of here!

(THE END)


TOPICS: Culture/Society; Editorial; Political Humor/Cartoons
KEYWORDS: barry; davebarry; humor; titanic
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1 posted on 03/04/2007 11:33:58 AM PST by nuconvert
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To: Boxsford; Irish Rose; Ditter; kitkat; Pan_Yans Wife

pong


2 posted on 03/04/2007 11:34:48 AM PST by nuconvert ([there are bad people in the pistachio business] (...but his head is so tiny...))
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To: nuconvert

Actually, reading Dave's script wasn't as bad as sitting through the movie "Titanic". That was the last movie I ever went to, and I thought that darn boat would never sink so I could get out of there!


3 posted on 03/04/2007 11:50:32 AM PST by basil (Exercise your Second Amendment rights--buy another gun today.)
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To: leda

"Near...far..."


4 posted on 03/04/2007 11:59:01 AM PST by patton (Sanctimony frequently reaps its own reward.)
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To: nuconvert; patton

very funny! gotta just love dave barry!


5 posted on 03/04/2007 11:59:23 AM PST by leda (The quiet girl on the stairs.)
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To: patton

if you hadn't distracted me with your
weather commentary, i wouldda beat ya ;)


6 posted on 03/04/2007 12:00:32 PM PST by leda (The quiet girl on the stairs.)
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To: leda

Well, it is better than a liberal math writing prof, I guess...LOL


7 posted on 03/04/2007 12:00:41 PM PST by patton (Sanctimony frequently reaps its own reward.)
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To: patton

stop reading my mind...again and again and again....


8 posted on 03/04/2007 12:01:31 PM PST by leda (The quiet girl on the stairs.)
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To: basil

Ten minutes into Titanic, I was thinking "Just Sink Already."


9 posted on 03/04/2007 12:02:28 PM PST by dfwgator (The University of Florida - Championship U)
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To: leda

"Im am the king of the world..." LOL.


10 posted on 03/04/2007 12:02:40 PM PST by patton (Sanctimony frequently reaps its own reward.)
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To: patton

silly wabbit ;)


11 posted on 03/04/2007 12:03:39 PM PST by leda (The quiet girl on the stairs.)
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To: nuconvert
Leonardo DiCaprio, who has shown the world that he is not just a pretty face; he is a pretty face who, if he had been in my high school, would have spent a lot of time being held upside-down over the toilet by larger boys

LOL - no one can do it like Dave can!
12 posted on 03/04/2007 12:06:55 PM PST by reagan_fanatic (Have patience with me Jesus - I'm trying)
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To: dfwgator; leda

Oh, come on, now. It has prodided endless hours of entertainment, while out on our boat, second only to, well, beer.

And fishing - we caught a fish once, but nobody wanted to touch a fish out of the Potomac, so we tossed it and all the fishing geer over the side, and went back to drinking beer.

And making fun of this silly movie.


13 posted on 03/04/2007 12:07:13 PM PST by patton (Sanctimony frequently reaps its own reward.)
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To: nuconvert
LOL!
Bump
14 posted on 03/04/2007 12:11:20 PM PST by Fiddlstix (Warning! This Is A Subliminal Tagline! Read it at your own risk!(Presented by TagLines R US))
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To: patton
"Near...far..."



Titanic, what a really great song
Titanic, that boat was long
Titanic, Celine Dion
Shoulda been on the
Tiiiieee-Tanic

- Tom Petty
15 posted on 03/04/2007 12:13:37 PM PST by Grizzled Bear ("Does not play well with others.")
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To: Grizzled Bear

heheh.


16 posted on 03/04/2007 12:16:15 PM PST by patton (Sanctimony frequently reaps its own reward.)
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To: basil
My then-wife rented it. I had to leave the room. I couldn't take it.

The best thing about the Titanic's Oscar night was Jack Nicholson getting the best actor award "I had this sinking feeling all evening..." (which I heard the next day on the radio).

17 posted on 03/04/2007 12:21:25 PM PST by Calvin Locke
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To: nuconvert
But think of all the incidental revenue the movie created, from all the Jack Ballard/Discovery Channel underwater gloomy rust globules. And bright, featureless videos of old dinner plates and shoes on the bottom of the Atlantic!

AND the economic boom in ROV sales......
18 posted on 03/04/2007 12:29:49 PM PST by PSYCHO-FREEP
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To: nuconvert; Boxsford; Irish Rose; Ditter; kitkat; Pan_Yans Wife; 4woodenboats; They'reGone2000; ...

Thanks for making me laugh. Dave Barry rocks!

However, I have never seen Titanic and don't plan to
ever see it. I liked "The Unsinkable Molly Brown"
with Debbie Reynolds. Don't need no stinkin' revisionist
film maker tellin' me how the ship went down.

Now where do I go to buy an ACTUAL HISTORY
OFFSET CREDIT for Dave Barry?


19 posted on 03/04/2007 1:40:53 PM PST by Jo Nuvark (Those who bless Israel will be blessed, those who curse Israel will be cursed. Gen 12:3)
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To: Jo Nuvark

Perhaps what you need to buy, is a sense of humor for some of the folks around here?

On a crash landing drill, I actually looked at my flight instructor, and said, "If I give you a hundred dollar tip, will you buy a sense of humor?"

Of course, we still crashed.

But it was darn funny.


20 posted on 03/04/2007 7:02:48 PM PST by patton (Sanctimony frequently reaps its own reward.)
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