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Writers... help! I can't finish the story!

Posted on 08/17/2006 8:36:45 PM PDT by Number57

I've had this story worked out in my mind for going on twenty years. 1989. But now... I am stuck. I started a book based on it, but I'm no writer, obviously. I constantly re-read and edit, and re-read and edit more.

Probably because I've posted part of the story on sites that critique writing.

Anyway. I've hit a wall. A large brick wall. I've since stopped editing my own stuff, but try as I might, I can't write another chapter that I'm okay with. How do you, in your experience, get past it? I'll appreciate any help anyone can offer.


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To: nopardons

Bizzare.


321 posted on 08/18/2006 2:10:17 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!" Joe Young)
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To: Number57

Step one: get a dictaphone and lots of tapes. Tell he story to yourself, start-to-wherever-you-get-stuck.

Step two: play the tapes back to yourself, in a quiet room. Over and over and over again.

Step three: sleep on this, see if an answer suggests itself. Keep your dictaphone by your bedside and be ready to dictate, half-asleep. What do you want to happen? What would you least like to happen? Do either suggest a climax, or a conclusion to your story? After all, you don't necessarily need a happy ending, only a logical one.

Step four: if step three doesn't work, take a long break. Dream on it, but during daylight hours don't give it a second thought.

Step five: if the break doesn't work, find a few friends, play them the tapes so far. Seek their guidance. Do they think the story is worth telling? If so -- great! All you need do is finish it. If not, best to know now, amongst friendly folk, that the tale won't fly.

Step six: if after steps one-thru-five don't work, either kill the idea in its infancy, or give it over to a willing stranger.


322 posted on 08/18/2006 2:11:08 AM PDT by DieHard the Hunter (I am the Chieftain of my Clan. I bow to nobody. Get out of my way.)
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To: Number57

Yes, YOU certainly are.


323 posted on 08/18/2006 2:13:05 AM PDT by nopardons
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To: durasell

And Duracell's get charged.

I'm glad I didn't post the other chapters.


324 posted on 08/18/2006 2:13:05 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!" Joe Young)
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To: nopardons
The American arts scene was always more egalitarian than the European scene. That's faded now, but while it existed it benefited from its inclusiveness.
325 posted on 08/18/2006 2:13:11 AM PDT by durasell (!)
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To: rock58seg

Really? If I had a nickle...


326 posted on 08/18/2006 2:14:01 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!" Joe Young)
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To: nopardons

WTF ae you doing here?

Trolling?


327 posted on 08/18/2006 2:16:39 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!" Joe Young)
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To: Number57

Like I said, it was friendly advice. I've never been anything but encouraging to those starting out in the arts. So, take it, ignore, etc.


328 posted on 08/18/2006 2:16:55 AM PDT by durasell (!)
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To: durasell

Not you.


329 posted on 08/18/2006 2:18:25 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!" Joe Young)
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To: Number57

I'm just a lowly widget manufacturer, but I'm always encouraging to those starting out in the arts.


330 posted on 08/18/2006 2:21:02 AM PDT by durasell (!)
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To: nopardons

Ottoline

Hmmm.


331 posted on 08/18/2006 2:21:13 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!"~ Joe Young)
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To: durasell
Yes and no. The early Village "scene" wasn't all that different, really, from the European one. And the French one, with dear old Gertie and her amanuensis, of sorts, was stranger than the Bloomsbury bunch, who at least wasn't mostly ex-pats.
332 posted on 08/18/2006 2:23:23 AM PDT by nopardons
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To: durasell

"it was friendly advice."

Well, geez. Thanks.


333 posted on 08/18/2006 2:23:54 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!"~ Joe Young)
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To: Number57

I'm not a troll; but you are beginning to smell of one.


334 posted on 08/18/2006 2:24:23 AM PDT by nopardons
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To: nopardons

Hey

Relate to me.


335 posted on 08/18/2006 2:25:28 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!"~ Joe Young)
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To: Number57
You have no idea who that person was, I see. LOL

Go GOOGLE the name. :-)

336 posted on 08/18/2006 2:25:42 AM PDT by nopardons
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To: nopardons

I'm out. Time to start up the widget machinery...or as we call it in the trade, the widgetry. Take care.


337 posted on 08/18/2006 2:25:56 AM PDT by durasell (!)
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To: nopardons

Wrong. You came trolling in this thread.


338 posted on 08/18/2006 2:26:25 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!"~ Joe Young)
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To: Number57; nopardons

p.s. unless you're the second coming of John O'Hara, try to curb the hostility. He only got away with it because he was, well, John O'Hara.


339 posted on 08/18/2006 2:28:15 AM PDT by durasell (!)
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To: nopardons

Phfft.

Deal.


340 posted on 08/18/2006 2:28:20 AM PDT by Number57 ("Don't quote Dickens in my apartment!"~ Joe Young)
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