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I died because I'm poor. (Compassionate mod kicks in a penny for the funeral)
Poet
| I.C. Howe
Posted on 06/26/2006 5:44:09 AM PDT by phoenixrising47
I died because I'm poor.
I'm floating in the water. My Mom is accross from me. Mosquitos swarm around us. They're our only friends.
I'm in the United States. Of, America. Not Vietnam. I'm not on T.V. It's really me. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
Mama's eyes are fluttering. Like a butterfly. This is real. Please, people. Not a photo op. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
I spit on Mama's lips, to give her moisture. Her face turns cold. I'm crying 'cause I'm poor.
Oh, Mama! Dear sweet Mama. I wail into the sky. Where's that promising Bush? Mama didn't have to die.
Now it's my turn. I hear the helicopter, but have no strenth to go out on the porch. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
I hear the rotors of the blades. I'm hugging Mama. Get her warm. Oh, Mama, it's come to this. We're dying 'cause we're poor.
I reach out to the men. And suddenly it's black. My life's film has broke. It broke 'cause I'm poor.
It broke 'cause I'm poor. It didn't have to be. We did better in the Tsunami. We did better in the war.
We died 'cause we're poor
by I.C. Howe
TOPICS: Culture/Society; US: Louisiana; US: Mississippi
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To: phoenixrising47
Lazy and stupid is more like it.
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:46:22 AM PDT
by
Ron in Acreage
(Liberal Democrats-Party before country, surrender before victory, generous with other peoples money.)
To: phoenixrising47
You're kinda fat for being so poor.
To: phoenixrising47
Mama didn't have to die. No she didn't. You could have gotten her out of town but you didn't.
Because you're stupid.
You could have stockpiled some food and water but you didn't.
Because you're stupid.
There are many things you could have done but didn't.
Because you're stupid.
And probably drunk.
203
posted on
06/26/2006 6:48:17 AM PDT
by
Harmless Teddy Bear
(The bottom 60% does 40% of the work, the top 40% does 60% of the work. Just who are the "workers"?)
To: Allegra
You are the next Maya Angelou. Lucky thing.
204
posted on
06/26/2006 6:48:24 AM PDT
by
Xenalyte
(The wages of sin are death, but after taxes are taken out it's just sort of a tired feeling.)
To: phoenixrising47
Thankfully the U.S.A. is not run by people like you.
Oh wait!.New Orleans was run by people like you.
205
posted on
06/26/2006 6:55:27 AM PDT
by
builder
(I don't want a piece of someone else's pie)
To: phoenixrising47
It is not like it was a big secret that a hurricane was coming to New Orleans. Anybody who wanted to get out of town would have had enough time to walk to safety.
It is predictable but sad that after decades on the government dole, a few people have become completely incapable of taking care of themselves. The literally do not have enough sense to come in out of the rain.
When people become that disfuctional, some of them will die. It is sad, but true.
BTW, how many more months will we have to wait until the number of people killed in NO by floodwaters will be exceeded by the number of people who would have been killed by the normal rate of rape 'n murder that would have occured in NO if the storm had not come? Or has that date already gone by?
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:55:53 AM PDT
by
gridlock
(What is most important to you is more important to you than it is to anybody else.)
To: phoenixrising47
It's an odd thing. While I've been broke, I've never been poor...
207
posted on
06/26/2006 6:58:11 AM PDT
by
jonascord
("Let 'em burn!...")
To: phoenixrising47
208
posted on
06/26/2006 6:58:27 AM PDT
by
Disambiguator
(I'm not paranoid, just pragmatic.)
To: phoenixrising47
... Now it's my turn. I hear the helicopter, but have no strenth to go out on the porch. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
I hear the rotors of the blades. I'm hugging Mama. Get her warm. Oh, wait a minute... That's just Congressman William Jefferson flying in to pick up the tin-foil wrapped money from his freezer.
I guess I'm screwed after all. I'm dying because I'm not a Congressman with a freezer full of money.
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:59:53 AM PDT
by
gridlock
(What is most important to you is more important to you than it is to anybody else.)
To: phoenixrising47
I see someone is having a pitty party based on lies this morning.
210
posted on
06/26/2006 7:00:43 AM PDT
by
Redleg Duke
(¡Salga de los Estados Unidos de América, invasor!)
To: nonliberal
I thought that was some real moonbat anthology until I read the author's name -- TWICE!!!
To: small voice in the wilderness
There's a beautiful dedication to her 15th child, Assinine, I was goin' to write a ode to my chillruns too, 'specially my twins Shanda Lear and Chlymidia, but I was too busy tryin' to score crack and dodgin' Five Oh.
whereby she asks the age old question: 'And WHY is he lookin so blank?'
Not to be no gramma' nazi o' nuthin', but shouldn't that be "why BE he lookin' so blank?"
To: phoenixrising47
To: phoenixrising47
I.C. Dedpepl
214
posted on
06/26/2006 7:04:39 AM PDT
by
SlowBoat407
(What is our exit strategy in the war on poverty?)
To: phoenixrising47
The poet should be forced to watch The Grapes of Wrath over and over again until it sinks in what true poorness and desperation is. And then I suggest reading Tom Brokaw's book "The Greatest Generation" and learn a lesson about how people living in the poorest possible conditions managed through hard work, faith in God, and sticking together as a family unit managed to pull themselves out of the hopeless situation.
To: phoenixrising47
To quote Whoopie.
"GET YOUR HANDS OF MY VAGINA"
216
posted on
06/26/2006 7:05:45 AM PDT
by
cripplecreek
(I'm trying to think but nothing happens)
To: after dark
They will pray for our deaths.They do not care about you or your children. Well, DUH! What was your first clue!
217
posted on
06/26/2006 7:05:51 AM PDT
by
gridlock
(What is most important to you is more important to you than it is to anybody else.)
To: Zechariah_8_13
zech, you must see the pic in comment #144
218
posted on
06/26/2006 7:09:20 AM PDT
by
VoiceOfBruck
(optional, printed after your name on post)
To: Xenalyte
I axed for a FEMA card so I could get some pottery poetry lessings.
219
posted on
06/26/2006 7:10:02 AM PDT
by
humblegunner
(If you're gonna die, die with your boots on.)
To: true_blue_texican
I learned that one when I was in third grade. That part has not grown up yet.
220
posted on
06/26/2006 7:12:44 AM PDT
by
nonliberal
(Graduate: Curtis E. LeMay School of International Relations)
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