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I died because I'm poor. (Compassionate mod kicks in a penny for the funeral)
Poet
| I.C. Howe
Posted on 06/26/2006 5:44:09 AM PDT by phoenixrising47
I died because I'm poor.
I'm floating in the water. My Mom is accross from me. Mosquitos swarm around us. They're our only friends.
I'm in the United States. Of, America. Not Vietnam. I'm not on T.V. It's really me. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
Mama's eyes are fluttering. Like a butterfly. This is real. Please, people. Not a photo op. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
I spit on Mama's lips, to give her moisture. Her face turns cold. I'm crying 'cause I'm poor.
Oh, Mama! Dear sweet Mama. I wail into the sky. Where's that promising Bush? Mama didn't have to die.
Now it's my turn. I hear the helicopter, but have no strenth to go out on the porch. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
I hear the rotors of the blades. I'm hugging Mama. Get her warm. Oh, Mama, it's come to this. We're dying 'cause we're poor.
I reach out to the men. And suddenly it's black. My life's film has broke. It broke 'cause I'm poor.
It broke 'cause I'm poor. It didn't have to be. We did better in the Tsunami. We did better in the war.
We died 'cause we're poor
by I.C. Howe
TOPICS: Culture/Society; US: Louisiana; US: Mississippi
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To: Madame Dufarge
Good one! LOL. That was great.
To: phoenixrising47
10 points off for not finding a way to make "Bush's fault" rhyme.
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posted on
06/26/2006 5:59:11 AM PDT
by
NonValueAdded
("I'm all in favor of a dignified retirement: Why not try it on Kerry as a pilot program?" M. Steyn)
To: phoenixrising47
His poetry sucks. It just isn't good--depsiote the message. I've read better from sixth graders.
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posted on
06/26/2006 5:59:11 AM PDT
by
BamaAndy
(Heart & Iron--the story of America through an ordinary family. ISBN: 1-4137-5397-3)
To: Sidebar Moderator
The Mods are slow this morning. :-)
No, we're here. Just reading and drinking some coffee ;-)
Don't you just love the smell of Ozone in the morning? Smells like victory!
124
posted on
06/26/2006 5:59:21 AM PDT
by
McGruff
(Pfc. Kristian Menchaca, Pfc. Thomas L. Tucker, your murderers will be found.)
To: phoenixrising47
I died because I'm poor. Working is for Suckers.
125
posted on
06/26/2006 5:59:24 AM PDT
by
xsrdx
(Diligentia, Vis, Celeritas)
To: nonliberal; Xenalyte
This is out of the compilation "A Line in the Sand" by Dick Draggin.
LOL! Right, I should have included the book title, so that would be Under the Grand Stands by Seymour Butts!
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posted on
06/26/2006 5:59:52 AM PDT
by
starbase
(Understanding Written Propaganda (click "starbase" to learn 22 manipulating tricks!!))
To: phoenixrising47
Truly, your poem is the gift that keeps giving!
A second reading inspired fresh gales of laughter. This is wonderful stuff.
Apply for a grant!
127
posted on
06/26/2006 5:59:55 AM PDT
by
headsonpikes
(Genocide is the highest sacrament of socialism.)
To: All
I had to take a bathroom break...is the kid still dead?
To: phoenixrising47
You died because you lived below sea level. DUH!!
To: Xenalyte
"We died 'cause we're poor"Then how did he write this?
To: phoenixrising47
I died because I'm poor.You are poor by choice.
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:00:53 AM PDT
by
Toby06
(True conservatives vote based on their values, not for parties.)
To: phoenixrising47
To: Millicent_Hornswaggle
[Poor is a defeatest state of mind that all liberals push to make everyone feel sorry for them. It's called welfare state.]
ZOT!
If it weren't for the poor and victimized among us, there would not be a solid democrat voting base. Then where would we be?
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:01:11 AM PDT
by
Tenacious 1
(War Monger...In the name of liberty, let's go to war!!!!)
To: phoenixrising47
Buh-bye...
134
posted on
06/26/2006 6:01:25 AM PDT
by
Jonah Hex
("How'd you get that scar, mister?" "Nicked myself shaving.")
To: SlowBoat407
Wow -- that's a classic. LOL!
135
posted on
06/26/2006 6:01:41 AM PDT
by
Alberta's Child
(Can money pay for all the days I lived awake but half asleep?)
To: phoenixrising47
We got a bad one here. User name Phoenix Rising and the only sentence from his profile..."I concerned member of the Human Race"
Hey idiot, if you stop screwing around on message boards, go get a job, you won't be dying anymore. Just go find a job you kinda think is fun and go from there. Geesh you guys are losers. Buck up!
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:01:55 AM PDT
by
Vision
("America's best days lie ahead. You ain't seen nothing yet"- Reagan)
To: phoenixrising47
OK I'm convinced. Where do I sign up for Marxism?
(Naturally I'll be with you on the central planning committee right? You aren't going to make me slog it out in the mud with all the other peasants are you?)
137
posted on
06/26/2006 6:02:01 AM PDT
by
tcostell
(MOLON LABE)
To: ArrogantBustard
138
posted on
06/26/2006 6:02:22 AM PDT
by
tcostell
(MOLON LABE)
To: phoenixrising47
7 trillion dollar spent on the war on poverty, and you're still poor?
139
posted on
06/26/2006 6:02:38 AM PDT
by
MarkeyD
(The patriotism of the New York Times = The humanity of an Islamic terrorist.)
To: Sloth
WOW...Is George that bad of a singer???
140
posted on
06/26/2006 6:02:47 AM PDT
by
Iscool
(I spent MOST of my MONEY on cold beer and hot women...The REST, I just wasted ...)
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