As always, I agree with 99.44% of what you write. I do think on this one you overloaded on the anger and were a tad short on crispness.
I have an impossible goal of writing like Mark Steyn, a goal I recommend to all other writers. He sets the standard that killing with a stiletto is more effective (and more amusing to the reader) than killing with a meat ax. It's a very hard discipline.
Other than plaguing you with an impossible goal, I liked your latest.
Cordially,
Congressman Billybob
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