Rather disappointing production values. The Swift Vote Veterans do a better job.
Have the Swift Boat Vets done an ad recently? I just received a request for another donation.
Cheesey music!
I'll say... sounds like a kiosk booth advertisement for some product at a Fuller Brush sales convention.
I agree. The narrator talks so fast in some parts you can hardly understand what he is saying. A more concise message would be much more effective.
I'm afraid so. All those "fade to black" transistions leave the screen black too much of the the time. Cross fades or straight cuts would make a huge (or should I say hugh) improvement in this clip.
You said it.
This commercial pretty much sucks.