To: radu
I sense your pulse beneath your warm skin.
Your blood is so inviting...
212 posted on
10/03/2003 3:57:08 PM PDT by
Darkchylde
(My tagline exploits.... ME!)
To: radu
That is an example of a different form of haiku I'm
experimenting with. However, I left a word out. It's
meant to have 10 syllables in the first line & 7 in the
second. So, allow me to correct myself.
I can sense your pulse beneath your warm skin.
Your blood is so inviting...
213 posted on
10/03/2003 4:11:33 PM PDT by
Darkchylde
(My tagline exploits.... ME!)
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