To: radu
That is an example of a different form of haiku I'm
experimenting with. However, I left a word out. It's
meant to have 10 syllables in the first line & 7 in the
second. So, allow me to correct myself.
I can sense your pulse beneath your warm skin.
Your blood is so inviting...
213 posted on
10/03/2003 4:11:33 PM PDT by
Darkchylde
(My tagline exploits.... ME!)
To: Darkchylde; radu
I am the dark of night
the stillness of the fields
The wolves mournful howl
upon the wild wooded streams
I am the the whisper in the ear
the fevered goodnite kiss
I am a coldness of the soul
that longs for warm embrace
I am a shadow of a mist
that hides her enchanting face.
214 posted on
10/03/2003 4:24:10 PM PDT by
Darksheare
(No-one ever accused me of being 'nice' before.)
To: Darkchylde
I never understood the structure of haikus til recently. I've learned about that right here.
I can sense your pulse beneath your warm skin.
Your blood is so inviting...
I like this one. It sounds like something Radu would say.
Hmmmmm, maybe I should pull the movies out and watch them again. It's been a while. Maybe (that's a small "maybe". LOL) I'll get inspired to write a little something.
238 posted on
10/05/2003 3:09:33 AM PDT by
radu
(May God watch over our troops and keep them safe)
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