[Jeff Head]

Well, Elisha had the guts to put the work out in the public eye...and I am glad...I believe it has much more merit and potential than you imagine, and based upon Elisha's response and reaction to the fedback, I believe it will get better with the telling.

You also had the fortitude to place something out here in the public eye on this thread.

Of the two, mainly because of the nature and tone of what I see from both...at this point I'll have to go with Elisha's, both from a literary and a reasoned/civil dialog standpoint.

[Rhyminsimon]

Dear Friends one and all

It is not my nature
Nor was it my intent
To cause ill will
I just needed to vent

So I tell you I’m sorry
I take it all back
And admit that it is
Just good manners I lack

I know I was wrong
I must blame it on the bard
To steer him correctly
Sometimes is hard

The words flow
Metered to rhyme
Perhaps the words
Will become nicer in time

For now, this inner bard
Has an axe to grind
He really means no harm
Pay him no mind

So forgive me, I beg of you
Let’s bury the axe
You do your thing
And I’ll try to relax

[Elisha]

Thanks again for your words of encouragement and support.