[Overtaxed]

Well....it's kind of disjointed but so far I'm writing the same point of time from three different characters' viewpoints. I still can't decide whom to make the viewpoint character but I've got a bit of background/ motivation stuff down.

[Snake65]

Sorry to break in on this but good use of POV really makes or breaks a story. You're right to do a lot of thinking about it. What might help you decide is to consider making the viewpoint character the one who has the most at stake/most to gain or lose (emotionally, physically, whatever) in the scene you're writing.

[JenB]

Like I said, if you want opinions, encouragement, or just to know that someone else has read the thing...

Ok, so I'm procrastinating on my own thing.