Well written and well paced.
HOU might wish to read up on the Trikaya: Nirmanakaya ( body of form). Sambhogakaya ( biody of energy or the enjoyment body,and the Dharmakaya,the body of unborn, unorignated and unceasing space.. I am sure it would give you some interesting ideas about the subject matter, especially the Sambhogakaya, the body of energy, this energy is what the sprites gods and godesses are made from.The lineage sprites are called Yidams, and these are beneficial to human beings.
Thank you for your kind words! These aren’t true sprites, this was just the name given to the worms by the first explorers. Still, worth looking into this mythos...