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To: nickcarraway

A ponderous piece. The author should be commended for dogged pursuit of the facts and for taking interest in all of those whom he contacted. In fact, he would make a good investigative journalist. My only complaint is that his writing stretched far beyond what is necessary in terms of length and detail. A+, however, for subject matter. No spoiler alert here. Read it and weeeeeeeep.


12 posted on 07/17/2021 10:15:45 PM PDT by Fester Chugabrew (No audits. No peace.)
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To: Fester Chugabrew

The occasional Atlantic articles I’ve read were all like that. I actually enjoy that writing style which is very different from the concise, shallow writing I more often see on the Internetz.

Tyler Rogoway at The Drive/Warzone writes in much the same, voluminous way, with every hypothesis fleshed out in its entirety. Reading two or three of his articles will occupy an entire evening.


15 posted on 07/17/2021 10:51:24 PM PDT by steve86 (Prophecies of Maelmhaedhoc O'Morgair (Latin form: Malachy))
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To: Fester Chugabrew

I tried to read it. I don’t mind The Atlantic in general, they sometimes do have compelling stories. This one is just too long and too much detail to get through - it’s like 8 paragraphs just to explain what he is going to write about. So I scanned and scrolled and scanned and couldn’t find “the answer to the mystery seeds”.

Agreed, kudos to the author for putting in the time and legwork to research - that is missing in most journalism these days... but get to the point faster next time please. Put the extraneous details in an appendix or something.


22 posted on 07/18/2021 12:43:10 AM PDT by monkeyshine (live and let live is dead)
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