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To: SJackson

Whoever wrote that headline should have their credentials revoked.............


4 posted on 12/16/2020 6:46:01 AM PST by Red Badger ( “The goal of socialism is communism.”... Vladimir Lenin)
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To: Red Badger

I’m not an English major - and I can see how the headline might seem ambiguous, but had it been about the death of the teen, it should have been punctuated thusly:
Teen, arrested for murder of California woman, fatally stabbed while hiking.


6 posted on 12/16/2020 6:51:48 AM PST by Quality_Not_Quantity ("...behind every blade of grass...")
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To: Red Badger

It reads like the teen who was arrested got fatally stabbed while hiking.

How about instead: Teen Arrested For Murder in California Hiker Stabbing

Gets rid of the word “fatally” but that’s clearly indicated in the murder charge.


9 posted on 12/16/2020 6:58:19 AM PST by babble-on
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