Why these writers seem to think they need to exaggerate what was bad enough to begin with. Coldcocked would have been much more accurate.
The kid was taken to a hospital and suffered a concussion.
The thug (is it ok to refer to him as such) didn’t slap the kid, he sucker-punched him from behind. He kind of danced up to him like he was joining the dance and when the kid turned away, he hit him with his fist.
Its still ok to punctuate.