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To: Cletus.D.Yokel
I watched the second plane hit from my office in NJ.
I wrote this on the second anniversary of 9/11.

Holes in the Air

It was a morning like any other
The day started out most fair
Four planes full of friends fell out of the sky
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

T’was just before nine, Eastern Daylight Time
I sat in my office chair.
“Come quick,” someone said, “The tower’s on fire.”
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

Helpless we stood and unknowing we watched
Smoke rising into the air.
“Just what happened?” “I heard it was a plane.”
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

The second plane hit, a fresh burst of fire
And all we could do was stare
“Can we help?” “It’s too far.” “What can we do?”
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

Then came the word, the Pentagon’s been hit.
It’s really too much to bear.
We’re under attack, no way to strike back.
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

Heroes rushed in as workers rushed out
Save lives, was their only care.
They just went to work and never came home.
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

In a plane to the west, men cried “Let’s Roll!”
Free men refuse to despair.
They chose to save others, not die like sheep.
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

A great roaring sound, tower two came down.
Quickly, we offered a prayer.
Tragedy not done, down came tower one.
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

We lost Battalion Chief Mike, the brave.
Beautiful Barbara, fair
Still in our hearts, they died as they lived
Now we’re living with holes in the air.

Laissez le bon Trump rouler!

WWG1WGA

Garde la Foi, mes amis! Nous nous sommes les sauveurs de la République! Maintenant et Toujours!
(Keep the Faith, my friends! We are the saviors of the Republic! Now and Forever!)

LonePalm, le Républicain du verre cassé (The Broken Glass Republican)

899 posted on 09/11/2018 11:42:31 AM PDT by LonePalm (Commander and Chef)
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To: LonePalm

ThanQ chef. Well done.


901 posted on 09/11/2018 11:46:32 AM PDT by Cletus.D.Yokel (Catastrophic, Anthropogenic Climate Alterations: The acronym explains the science.)
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To: LonePalm

Thank you for the very beautiful poem.

Eyes wet....


903 posted on 09/11/2018 11:49:51 AM PDT by little jeremiah (When we do not punish evildoers we are ripping the foundations of justice from future generations)
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To: LonePalm

What an absolutely amazing piece of work. I need to think of a place to put that where it won’t be lost. Simply can’t tell you how impressed I am. It has the essence of what moves me in poetry - a true voice, a shared emotion, and control. The most sincere thank you, LonePalm. It should be a song.


928 posted on 09/11/2018 12:16:47 PM PDT by mairdie
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To: LonePalm

Thank you.


947 posted on 09/11/2018 12:48:27 PM PDT by CJ Wolf (Free)
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To: LonePalm

Most Excellent LonePalm!!!!
ThankQ for sharing. I read your poem while Q#2149 video was playing on my second screen.


1,077 posted on 09/11/2018 4:53:38 PM PDT by ssschev (Pick up the can, throw out the trash.)
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To: LonePalm

Beautiful and poignant.


1,104 posted on 09/11/2018 5:37:14 PM PDT by Melian (Patriots fight!)
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