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To: bagster

You’re an ass; but I love poetry so I’ll succumb this once.

Two of my favorites.

First, by A.R. Ammons, the second by Gerard Manley Hopkins:

Hardweed Path Going - A.R. Ammons

Every evening, down into the hardweed
going,
the slop bucket heavy, held-out, wire handle
freezing in the hand, put it down a minute, the jerky
smooth unspilling levelness of the knees,
meditation of a bucket rim,
lest the wheat meal,
floating on clear greasewater, spill,
down the grown-up path:

don’t forget to slop the hogs,
feed the chickens,
water the mule,
cut the kindling,
build the fire,
call up the cow:

supper is over, it’s starting to get
dark early,
better get the scraps together, mix a little meal in,
nothing but swill.

The dead-purple woods hover on the west.
I know those woods.
Under the tall, ceiling-solid pines, beyond the edge of
field and brush, where the wild myrtle grows,
I let my jo-reet loose.
A jo-reet is a bird. Nine weeks of summer he
sat on the well bench in a screened box,
a stick inside to walk on,
“jo-reet,” he said, “jo-reet.”
and I
would come up to the well and draw the bucket down
deep into the cold place where red and white marbled
clay oozed the purest water, water celebrated
throughout the county:
“Grits all gone?”
“jo-reet.”

Better turn him loose before
cold weather comes on.
Doom caving in
inside
any pleasure, pure
attachment
of love.

Beyond the wild myrtle away from cats I turned him loose
and his eye asked me what to do, where to go;
he hopped around, scratched a little, but looked up at me.
Don’t look at me. Winter is coming.
Disappear in the bushes. I’m tired of you and will
be alone hereafter. I will go dry in my well.
I will turn still.
Go south. Grits is not available in any natural form.
Look under leaves, try mushy logs, the floors of piny-woods.
South into the dominion of bugs.

They’re good woods.
But lay me out if a mourning dove far off in the dusky pines starts.

Down the hardweed path going,
leaning, balancing, away from the bucket, to
Sparkle, my favorite hog, sparse, fine black hair,
grunted while feeding if rubbed,
scratched against the hair, or if talked to gently:
got the bottom of the slop bucket:
“Sparkle...”
“grunt, grunt...”
“You hungry?”
“grunt, grunt...”
“Hungry, girly?”
“grunt, grunt, grunt....”
blowing, bubbling in the trough.

Waiting for the first freeze:
“Think it’s going to freeze tonight?” say the neighbors,
the neighbors going by.

Hog-killing.

Oh Sparkle, when the axe tomorrow morning falls
and the rush is made to open your throat,
I will sing, watching dry-eyed as a man, sing my
love for you in the tender feedings.

She’s nothing but a hog, boy.

Bleed out, Sparkle, the moon-chilled bleaches
of your body hanging upside-down
hardening through the mind and night of the first freeze.

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Pied Beauty - Gerard Manley Hopkins

Glory be to God for dappled things –
For skies of couple-colour as a brinded cow;
For rose-moles all in stipple upon trout that swim;
Fresh-firecoal chestnut-falls; finches’ wings;
Landscape plotted and pieced – fold, fallow, and plough;
And áll trádes, their gear and tackle and trim.

All things counter, original, spare, strange;
Whatever is fickle, freckled (who knows how?)
With swift, slow; sweet, sour; adazzle, dim;
He fathers-forth whose beauty is past change:
Praise him.


1,880 posted on 08/08/2018 7:10:33 PM PDT by Jamestown1630 ("A Republic, if you can keep it.")
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To: Jamestown1630

That actually is profound.


1,883 posted on 08/08/2018 7:12:52 PM PDT by txhurl (World War Q..... next stop: ....what IS the next stop? Carter's Iran.)
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To: Jamestown1630
You’re an ass; but I love poetry so I’ll succumb this once.

See how easy you are?

Bagster

Bagster the ass.

1,895 posted on 08/08/2018 7:25:49 PM PDT by bagster ( "Even bad men love their mamas.")
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