Not a very well written article, almost like a random jumbling of words...
Translated from New Zealandnease.
“Not a very well written article, almost like a random jumbling of words...”
For me to make such a judgment, would be far above my station and pay grade.
NB: Good editors are not cheap.
But word down in the gutter is, the NYT has a surplus, might find a good used one? Cheap?