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To: stillafreemind

I don't know what's more tragic - the incident or the the reportage.

They "died of their" ... DIED OF THEIR WHAT ?!?!

Then the lead is buried in the fourth paragraph.

… accidental contact with … in this case, electrocution …

6 posted on 07/26/2011 10:27:12 AM PDT by delacoert

To: delacoert

Wow, maybe you can find an article on it by searching. I didn’t and don’t critique, just read the article and felt for the families.

9 posted on 07/26/2011 10:29:41 AM PDT by stillafreemind

To: delacoert

Plus the headline says they were injured but in fact they were killed.

14 posted on 07/26/2011 10:38:41 AM PDT by DManA

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