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March 21, 2011 | Mayr Fortuna

[Mayr Fortuna]

Resume for Mayr Sampaio Fortuna Neto
Mayr Fortuna as mostly known, 58 years old Civil Engineer has been working in IT since 1973, and has been Programmer, Chief Programmers Team, Chief Programmers Pool, Systems Analyst, Project Leader, Chief Project Leader, Project Manager, IT Consultant to States Government and Federal Government in Brazil, Business Consultant and Business Man.
During all this years has developed and implemented small and large scaled IT Proposals contemplating Hardware and Software with the proficient use of MS Project and Excel tools among others, also masters Relational and Non-Relational as Oracle, MS-SQL, MySql, Universe and QM Multi-Valued Databases.
Contractors may count on skills acquired in dealing with Accounting, Budgeting, Merchandise Supply, Warehousing and Stock Control and Distribution Delivery Logistics and Implementation. Project research development and implementation as well as Software Tool Development (Desktop and Internet) and implementation, Software Marketing Team Managing and Marketing Proposals, case driven adaptations and Managing.
Contractors may also count on proficient reading, writing and spoken abilities in Brazilian Portuguese, Latin American and Spain Spanish and USA and England English.
The resumed, as perhaps not a master of Cisco Technologies is well versed in Networking and Telecomunications and is not only able to but also available to learn and interact with Technical Teams and users thru the use of a 3G 10M connection on his own platform or on supplied one if needed.
Brasília, January 22 2011 - Mayr Fortuna

[warsaw44]

thought he’d approach people

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[callisto]

Try this as a starting point. The last paragraph needs cleaning up and I would expand on where you worked and things achievements you attained in the position. Age, sex, etc do not need to be mentioned in a resume so I also recommend revising the first sentence to exclude the year 1973. If you have Microsoft Word or Works try using one of the resume templates.

Civil Engineer has been working in IT since 1973, and has been Programmer, Chief Programmers Team, Chief Programmers Pool, Systems Analyst, Project Leader, Chief Project Leader, Project Manager, IT Consultant to States Government and Federal Government in Brazil, Business Consultant and Business Man.

• Developed and implemented small and large scaled IT Proposals contemplating Hardware and Software with the proficient use of MS Project and Excel tools among others, also masters Relational and Non-Relational as Oracle, MS-SQL, MySql, Universe and QM Multi-Valued Databases.
• Contractors may count on skills acquired in dealing with Accounting, Budgeting, Merchandise Supply, Warehousing and Stock Control and Distribution Delivery Logistics and Implementation.
• Project research development and implementation as well as Software Tool Development (Desktop and Internet) and implementation, Software Marketing Team Managing and Marketing Proposals, case driven adaptations and Managing.
• Contractors may also count on proficient reading, writing and spoken abilities in Brazilian Portuguese, Latin American and Spain Spanish and USA and England English.

[Mayr Fortuna]

Hey guys?

You´re all having lots of fun with it aren´t you?

But it was an honest to God search for help...

Sorry if you do not think so or do not like it...

When you are 58, unemployed and trying to change course, this is serious. Not trying to victimize myself here ...

It´s just I used to write resume in Portuguese like this, short and cursive, with no bullets and all. CV is all another format.

The question is: Is the English Bad?

Anyway, thank you all...

[callisto]

The English was only “bad” in a few sections, mostly the first and last sentence. :)

[warsaw44]

Mayr Fortuna,

The question is: Is the English Bad?

The English you used is a bit confusing. Thats all.

- and I do sincerely wish you the best with your job search. I'm having a rough go of it myself these days.

[Mayr Fortuna]

Callisto?

Thank you very much.

[Immerito]

Best wishes with your job search. I definitely recommend using bullet points. I've made some recommended changes below in bold. Mayr Fortuna Add your Job objective here. Add your Professional Skills here. Examples: Microsoft Excel, PP MySQL Make sure to use key words from the job advertisement! Employment History: Most Recent Employer. Job Title Job description (given as a Bulleted list.) Previous Employer. Education: Engineering University. Bachelor's in Engineering. 19XX-19XX.

[Immerito]

Best wishes with your job search. I definitely recommend using bullet points. I've made some recommended changes below in bold.

Mayr Fortuna

Add your Job objective here.

Add your Professional Skills here.

Examples: Microsoft Excel, PP

MySQL

Make sure to use key words from the job advertisement!

Employment History:

Most Recent Employer.

Job Title

Job description (given as a Bulleted list.)

Previous Employer.

Job Title

Job description (given as a bulleted list.)

Education:

Engineering University. Bachelor's in Engineering. 19XX-19XX.

[Viking2002]

'What's the OLD syntax for Oracle's JOIN operation (pre-SQL92)? '

I took COBOL, Fortran, RPG II, and Assembler in college back in the early '80's, and can barely remember any of it. Don't even think Oracle was around then. Nowadays, I'm a smoke-jumper for FUBAR servers and workstations.

'What's a core dump?'

The result of the three-burrito platter I had the night before.

'What's she-bang mean? Really! :-)'

I can't remember, and neither can my buddies. It was one night twenty years ago, and we lost track of her after she got married.

"But know this, that in the last days perilous times will come: for men will be lovers of themselves, lovers of money, boasters, proud, blasphemers, disobedient to parents, unthankful, unholy, unloving, unforgiving, slanderers, without self-control, brutal, despisers of good, traitors, headstrong, haughty, lovers of pleasure rather than lovers of God, having a form of godliness but denying its power. And from such people turn away, for his name is Obama."

[callisto]

Your welcome! It was my pleasure.