[freedumb2003]

No, if you read the sentence it says the suspect shot the victim 5 times and then the suspect crashed her car and died.

English is a dying language...

[al baby]

Looked ok to me

[giotto]

Before one can write a coherent sentence, one needs to know how to think coherently. The sentence, as written, could mean either a) the perp crashed and died, after shooting the victim, or b) the victim was shot, then she crashed her car and died, but there was no logical connection. In other words, the victim was about to crash anyway, and the shooting had nothing to do with it.

If the writer had bothered to rework the sentence, he would have said "Police are searching for the suspect who shot a well-known Hollywood publicist five times, causing her to crash her Mercedes-Benz in a Beverly Hills neighborhood." Since the writer doesn't state whether she died at the scene, or whether she died from the bullet wounds or the crash, I can't complete that part of it.

[GladesGuru]

“No, if you read the sentence it says the suspect shot the victim 5 times and then the suspect crashed her car and died.

English is a dying language...”

How about:
“No, if you read the sentence it says the suspect shot the victim 5 times and then the suspect crashed her car and died.

Journalism is a dying occupation...