Interesting. I know I messed the title up by using an apostrophe, the the story was proof read by a very someone who is very knowledgeable in grammar before I posted it.
And it still lacks?
Wow, your tough.
It’s not you and grammatically there’s not much wrong with the story, although I wasn’t looking for that.
It’s the writer presuming to know what the dog thinks.
Like this.....
“He also doesn’t feel less of a dog because he cannot see. “