Ooh-—kay?
Clearly I know nothing about careful writing but do you think somewhere in the course of this story we could learn the names of these swamps? Would a list be too much to ask for? The writer even went so far as to list the towns where the swamps are but still couldn't quite give us the names of the places this story is all about.
Later, the name was changed to Adamant. But the local pond is still called Sodom Pond.
They still have an annual Blackfly Festival every spring.
I can't seem to find a photo of the pond, but here's a print called "Joepyeweed at Sodom Pond," a flowering meadow on the shore, by a local photographer.
Swamp Gas? (naturally occuring methane ignited by static electricity or lightning).
The author of the piece is Pam Hays.
Is there a reason why you never credit the authors?