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The American Haiku
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 | 09-23-07
 | Neuromancer
Posted on 09/23/2007 10:36:13 AM PDT by Neuromancer
Haiku, a traditional form of Japanese poetry, is a short verse of 17 syllables in three metrical sections (lines) of 5-7-5 syllables. A compact yet profound and evocative form, haiku gives an objective, suggestive, pithy and fleeting picture of its subject. 
What is said is important but what is unsaid may be more important. The poet may talk of nature but what he is conveying may be some deep feeling, an intuition or a concrete experience of life. Haiku is more concerned with human emotion or with experience than with human acts, and nature is used to reflect or suggest that emotion.
TOPICS: Poetry
KEYWORDS: americanhaiku; poetry
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To: Neuromancer
    
  
   
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 The American Haiku was developed over a period of several years on an internet web site called FREEREPUBLIC.COM.
 
 I would like to thank the owner, operators and financial donors who provide this public forum for allowing me, without condition, such a frivolous use of their bandwidth.
 
 The American Haiku is a direct descendant of the traditional Japanese art form.
 
 It contains nine, and only nine, beats and retains the homage to nature.
 
 It is sometimes titled and sometimes not.
 
 Neuromancer
 
 
 
 
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To: Neuromancer
    
  
   
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 This collection of American Haikus is dedicated to my friend Kate and the summer we shared
 
 
 
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To: Neuromancer
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                              BARREN LIMBS OF THE HEART 
 Hewn as deadwood
 With a
 Trusting
 Smile
 
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 BETWEEN THE WARM
 
 Entwined adrift
 Silent
 In the
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                              A PERFECT SHORE 
 Where lake
 And stone
 Dare yield
 To soft
 Eyes
 
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 DARK RIVERS MUST FLOW
 
 The gnawing things
 And coyotes
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To: Neuromancer
    The first time someone mentioned Haiku, I looked it up in my unabridged dictionary.
 The nearest I came was Haik which is a seldom used Norse word meaning Tramp.
 So tramp u!
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posted on 
09/23/2007 10:44:16 AM PDT
by 
HuntsvilleTxVeteran
(Remember the Alamo, Goliad and WACO, It is Time for a new San Jacinto)
 
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 BLOOD ON THE PARTING DOOR
 
 Scars speak
 Too much
 When the days
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 AT THE LEAVING
 
 You took
 The desert
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 The sea
 
 
 
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        |  | HIGH DESERT SAGE OFFERS UP A SENSORY EXPLOSION WHEN HELD IN A WARM HUMAN HAND. 
 THE TRUSTING HEART IS LITTLE DIFFERENT
 
 
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To: Kay Syrah; Camachee; bentfeather; January24th
    I would be greatly pleased if you would visit my work.
 
To: Neuromancer
    Hello Neuromancer, thank you for thinking of me.
Your work is just a beautiful as I remember from years past.
I shall try to write some haiku, I am not good at it, but I will try.
You will see that my screen name has changed, Soaring Feather and bentfeather are the same person.
 
To: Neuromancer
    Post #8 is amazingly beautiful and haunting.
 
To: Soaring Feather
    Thank you for the kind comments.
On one of the last days of summer, and of our relationship we sat at this very spot and listened to the animals of the night.
I had never seen the river so dark.
 
To: Neuromancer; theFIRMbss
    Sometimes when I’m drunk
I start vain haiku threads here
Ah, but is it art?
 
To: martin_fierro
    Sometimes when Im drunk
 I start vain haiku threads here
Ah, but is it art? Alas, I know not
This man of mystery, this
 Art of whom you speak.
 
To: martin_fierro
    
   
THE SUBSTANCE OF VANITY 
    
Wispy clouds 
 Dancing 
 Neath the 
 Damp sky 
To: Neuromancer
    Seeking, Searching, Never Finding
A clever way to BookMark Haikus
Comment #20 Removed by Kevmo
 
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09/23/2007 10:14:37 PM PDT
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Kevmo 
(We should withdraw from Iraq — via Tehran. And Duncan Hunter is just the man to get that job done.)
 
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