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The Hobbit Hole XXXIV - But better than rain or rippling streams...

Posted on 08/07/2007 7:52:15 AM PDT by HairOfTheDog

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To: JenB
This was not the bother I had expected to join up...

Best you can do is to try to raise 'em right.

6,741 posted on 11/05/2007 5:17:53 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (NaNoWriMo Word Count : 8293/50,000)
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To: Lil'freeper

I’ve been herding cats all day and haven’t accomplished anything on the story.


6,742 posted on 11/05/2007 5:18:22 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (NaNoWriMo Word Count : 8293/50,000)
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To: Lil'freeper

Yeah, that’s what second-brother wants to do. Or Marines but they don’t have chaplains and he’s had his heart set on that for a while.

First-brother wants to do electrical engineering apparently. And has decided he wants to do ROTC so as to avoid debt. That’s like... the first mature decision I know of out of him. This is a kid who didn’t get his driver’s license until 18 because he wouldn’t stop making cracks about knocking down old ladies.

I just really, really hope he can pass physicals or whatever. He had a growth hormone deficiency that they treated and he’s plenty tall but I don’t know if that leaves any problems.


6,743 posted on 11/05/2007 5:19:53 PM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 14100/50000)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Heh, I think my mom really despaired of Paul for a long time. But she’s always had a bit of cognitive difficulty figuring the boys out. Other than the youngest one. And me too. And youngest sister.

Well I guess none of us really turned out like she expected. But... um... she is probably going to be worried sick about Iraq from now on.


6,744 posted on 11/05/2007 5:21:39 PM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 16203/50000)
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To: JenB
I just really, really hope he can pass physicals or whatever. He had a growth hormone deficiency that they treated and he’s plenty tall but I don’t know if that leaves any problems.

I had the same problem, and I turned out ok(well, physically anyway.)

6,745 posted on 11/05/2007 5:21:40 PM PST by darkangel82 (And the band played on....)
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To: darkangel82

Yeah, he seems fine to us but you never know.


6,746 posted on 11/05/2007 5:22:03 PM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 16203/50000)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Well, that worked out then!!

I tell ya, we were pretty in the dumps...and it’s why I eventually went back to work in nursing...when we found out Steve’s truck had a blown head gasket. That’s major bucks.

But then Big Mac (Paynoattention’s husband) told us about a guy just outside of town and we took it to him for a second opinion and it ended up just being a water pump and a radiator fan clutch needed replacing.

Cost us 265 bucks. The truck runs like a dream now.

I was so relieved.


6,747 posted on 11/05/2007 5:23:00 PM PST by 2Jedismom ("She is nother fyshe nor fleshe, nor good red hearyng.")
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To: JenB; Lil'freeper; g'nad
Or Marines but they don’t have chaplains...

Suddenly things become a lot more clear.

6,748 posted on 11/05/2007 5:23:03 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (NaNoWriMo Word Count : 8293/50,000)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Yeah, Bother No. 2 wants to be a Presby minister/chaplain... so that’s 7 years of school *before* the chaplainy stuff. Yeep.


6,749 posted on 11/05/2007 5:28:01 PM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 16203/50000)
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To: darkangel82; JenB; Lil'freeper; Corin Stormhands; Rose in RoseBear; RosieCotton

I want to read what you guys are writing...how do I do it? Especially yours Corin...since I’m in it! Sorta.


6,750 posted on 11/05/2007 5:28:05 PM PST by 2Jedismom ("She is nother fyshe nor fleshe, nor good red hearyng.")
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To: 2Jedismom

Hmm. We would all have to find upload locations. Or email them to you :)


6,751 posted on 11/05/2007 5:29:11 PM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 16203/50000)
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To: JenB

So I can’t just go to the website and read it?

Forgive me if that’s a stupid question...I’m stupid.

;-)


6,752 posted on 11/05/2007 5:29:58 PM PST by 2Jedismom ("She is nother fyshe nor fleshe, nor good red hearyng.")
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To: 2Jedismom

Not a stupid question! They let you post an excerpt and some of us have. I have. My profile is at

http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/20621

and if you go to the “Novel Excerpt” section it’s there. “Writing Buddies” should have all the Hobbit Hole folks plus a couple others. You should recognize the HH names though.


6,753 posted on 11/05/2007 5:33:22 PM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 16203/50000)
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To: JenB

Excellent!

I’ll do it right now.


6,754 posted on 11/05/2007 5:34:24 PM PST by 2Jedismom ("She is nother fyshe nor fleshe, nor good red hearyng.")
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To: 2Jedismom; darkangel82; JenB; Lil'freeper; Rose in RoseBear; RosieCotton

You can read the first chapter of mine here:

http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/19667

That’s all I’m releasing until I’m done and edited. I’m still hoping to publish my 2005 Nano (the year I finished), but this is the one I actually want to see in print.

If nothing else, I may eventually self publish it.


6,755 posted on 11/05/2007 5:36:39 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (NaNoWriMo Word Count : 8293/50,000)
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To: Corin Stormhands

lulu.com is a great resource for that.... I plan to lulu a copy of mine myself.


6,756 posted on 11/05/2007 5:43:49 PM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 16345/50000)
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To: Corin Stormhands
I like it!

I’ve read yours...it’s good! I can almost hear the cicadas!

I’ve read jenb’s too...suspenseful!

Reading Rosie's in a sec...

6,757 posted on 11/05/2007 5:50:51 PM PST by 2Jedismom ("She is nother fyshe nor fleshe, nor good red hearyng.")
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To: 2Jedismom

Erm...so far I’ve been writing from the point of view of the more twisted characters. I switched my excerpt today, but I’m thinking of taking it down since it (hopefully) doesn’t really reflect the story. A lot of it is back story that it might help me to imagine, but isn’t really needed from the reader’s standpoint. If there was a reader...

I may put it up on-line on Google Docs when I’m done, though. Maybe.


6,758 posted on 11/05/2007 5:53:13 PM PST by RosieCotton ("Anything worth doing is worth doing badly." -- G.K. Chesterton [NaNo Count 8346/50000])
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To: 2Jedismom

I’m Kaypasa over there. I’ll let you read my draft (I can .pdf it sometime) as long as you understand that there is no type of draft that is in a rougher form than mine is right now. :) I mean, it’s really rough.


6,759 posted on 11/05/2007 5:56:23 PM PST by Lil'freeper (Don't taze me, bro! [[NaNoWriMo WoCo: 11070/50K]])
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To: RosieCotton

I like it! He reminds me of a CSI character, or “Law and Order” type guy...


6,760 posted on 11/05/2007 5:59:23 PM PST by 2Jedismom ("She is nother fyshe nor fleshe, nor good red hearyng.")
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