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To: bentfeather

I really would like to see
The inside of a symphony.
As every fluted note fades
choking color, feeding shades.

Look! As sound is secreted
It's counterpart is greeted.
In the blend, curiously mixed,
The harmony is rightly fixed,

And the world continues turning.


937 posted on 03/07/2006 5:48:52 AM PST by uncleshag (He who angers you controls you.)
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To: uncleshag

Pensive poetry, Unc. Where is your ©?


942 posted on 03/07/2006 6:12:22 AM PST by pelikan
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To: uncleshag; WayzataJOHNN; fatima; Knitting A Conundrum; ScubieNuc; HopeandGlory; Texas Songwriter; ..
I would like to see the inside
of a melody, to see the dance

of the music clef and staff
to see the notes join in a song

or watch the inside of a star
come to life and shine so bright

There are many things I wish to know
how does a snowflake feel, does
it know it's beautiful
does the wind have a minor key
who played the first drum

On and on I could go

what makes a good poem sing
or what makes chrystal ring
I heard the ancients believed
the planets sang, each planet
had a tone and on a cold night
while in the night they could be
heard in harmony offering their song

bentfeather (c) 03.07.06
950 posted on 03/07/2006 6:33:53 AM PST by Soaring Feather
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