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To: uncleshag; WayzataJOHNN; fatima; Knitting A Conundrum; ScubieNuc; HopeandGlory; Texas Songwriter; ..
I would like to see the inside
of a melody, to see the dance

of the music clef and staff
to see the notes join in a song

or watch the inside of a star
come to life and shine so bright

There are many things I wish to know
how does a snowflake feel, does
it know it's beautiful
does the wind have a minor key
who played the first drum

On and on I could go

what makes a good poem sing
or what makes chrystal ring
I heard the ancients believed
the planets sang, each planet
had a tone and on a cold night
while in the night they could be
heard in harmony offering their song

bentfeather (c) 03.07.06
950 posted on 03/07/2006 6:33:53 AM PST by Soaring Feather
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To: bentfeather

Wow!

You truely have a gift! About how many poems a week are you able to come up with?

Maybe it's because I'm out of creative shape, but it takes me about a week of hashing to get to something I might like. Then when I'm done, I feel kind of spent. Then it takes probably another week before creative ideas start bubbling up.

Anyway....keep 'em coming!


1,044 posted on 03/07/2006 7:52:24 PM PST by ScubieNuc
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