To: uncleshag; WayzataJOHNN; fatima; Knitting A Conundrum; ScubieNuc; HopeandGlory; Texas Songwriter; ..
I would like to see the inside
of a melody, to see the dance
of the music clef and staff
to see the notes join in a song
or watch the inside of a star
come to life and shine so bright
There are many things I wish to know
how does a snowflake feel, does
it know it's beautiful
does the wind have a minor key
who played the first drum
On and on I could go
what makes a good poem sing
or what makes chrystal ring
I heard the ancients believed
the planets sang, each planet
had a tone and on a cold night
while in the night they could be
heard in harmony offering their song
bentfeather (c) 03.07.06
To: bentfeather
Wow!
You truely have a gift! About how many poems a week are you able to come up with?
Maybe it's because I'm out of creative shape, but it takes me about a week of hashing to get to something I might like. Then when I'm done, I feel kind of spent. Then it takes probably another week before creative ideas start bubbling up.
Anyway....keep 'em coming!
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