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~The Dragon Flies' Lair was first posted August 27, 2003 ~

~A place to write a few lines of poetry or prose.~

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1 posted on 01/02/2006 7:52:10 AM PST by Soaring Feather
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To: WayzataJOHNN; Knitting A Conundrum; Texas Songwriter; HopeandGlory; SAMWolf; snippy_about_it; ...

Good Morning Everyone!
New Thread Ping!

2 posted on 01/02/2006 7:57:22 AM PST by Soaring Feather (January 2, 2006)
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To: bentfeather
This is the first time I have seen this thread series somehow.

I am not a big poetry person but that is very nice,reminds me of a moonlit June night.

3 posted on 01/02/2006 9:15:01 AM PST by carlr
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To: bentfeather
CALVING HEARTBREAK

Baby calves,a poem I penned,
To share my thoughts "bout where and when"
The calves are born and life begins,
So here's the story when it ends.
My heifer now, near two years old,
I'd kept to be my very own,
A "babydoll" we say, not to be sold,
But kept as years unfold.
And so nine months I watched with care
As birth approached, I was there
To help, if needed, in travail,
To push or pull, but not to fail,
But bring the joy of birth to where
There's a chance at life, a farmers' prayer.
Perhaps had it been a soft full moon,
Which urged gestation sing its tune,
Where harsh headlights honned the gloom,
Of loosing life; To loose so soon,
The baby calf died. And I immune
To senseless sorrow, wept inside
That I could not help.
Well there it is, a ranchers' life.
Of loss and gain, joy and strife.
I am particularly sad my daughter saw,
As Life struggled Death, it's story told
Before her very eyes.
She is too young. I've tried to guard
From harsh life-lessons;Lifes' courtyard.
It's life and death; No-holds-barred.
It's right to say that livings' hard.
So baby calves, they satisfy,
You do your best and really try.
But help alone can't satify.
The Reaper comes, the Reaper scythe,
It cuts a swath, it takes a life,
It's hard to try to clarify.
Why baby calves make me laugh and cry.

Jeffrey D.Russell
Jan 16,2006

158 posted on 01/17/2006 1:37:14 PM PST by Texas Songwriter
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To: bentfeather
I know nothing about poetry. I sometimes get sketchy thoughts that I write down. It usually reads kind of choppy, but to me it's how my thoughts proceed.

Here's an example:

The cave,No light, black, cold. stumbling, falling, pain. Afraid.

Lost, confused, Time unknown, Helpless, Dieing.

Regrets, Plans made, never claimed. Love never shown, Apologies never said, Sobbing.

Desperately praying, Humblely seeking, God. A light, a call. Joy unspeakable Flooding my soul. Saved!


When I was younger I liked to memorize some of the sing-song type poems, but now it doesn't seem to convey what I'm feeling.

I'm open to constructive criticism, and direction on how to refine this kind of poetry.
378 posted on 02/09/2006 12:57:20 AM PST by ScubieNuc
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To: bentfeather

Enjoyed the Dragon Fly poem.


906 posted on 03/06/2006 10:00:41 AM PST by blackie (Be Well~Be Armed~Be Safe~Molon Labe!)
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To: Soaring Feather

Two translators and an archeologist
Went traveling beneath the rising sun,
Behind the broken pyramids of Egypt,
Searching for a treasure in the dirt
Laboriously covering the sands of time.

They wandered for a while, halfhearted
Talking about Israel and Mecca
As if there was nothing here worthy
Of making a pilgrimage to:
Historians are often peculiar.

And then, to awake:
The scrolls were there, shining and golden,
Dripping in value like butterflies
Drenched in precious, diamond dew
The ink a faded purple, like the shades
Of leaning shadows cast across the plains,
An ancient cursive hand, archaic tongue
The translators alone could understand.
Inside those microscopic drops of ink
A thousand light bulbs, every one a glow
With fingers luminous, extending out
To shake the hands of their descendant children,
Little ladybugs, buzzing with age
And wit and work and wonder—
Dripping still. The photons in their day unnamed, unknown,
Like tiny sparrows in their migrant flight
Those incandescent bulbs not yet invented,
Spilling light across the songs of men,
The voices of the dead remain alive,
Whispering into the ears of death:
Enchanting her, persuading her to dance
And flaunt her mystery between the eyes
Of living generations, staring straight
Across a vacuum to the spirits dead—
The written word can cut across the sky,
That endless barrier, celestial wall,
And speak as if the earth were born to hear
And listen to these light bulbs of the past,
And time shall spill its mercy and its tears
For young Narcissus, dead before his age,
And left with but a flower as his tale—
“Tell my story,” shout the haunting dead
Through what is left of them. The genocide
And persecution suffered at their cause
Will wreak its havoc well, but once or twice
Will pause in face of glory and rethink
The tread of fate, a looming thing of darkness
Barely present, yet the vital force
Behind these thousand flowers on their tombs,
These carcasses in turmoil without breath,
These living forces sanctifying nature
With their fragile light bulbs. Fate controls
All that is ours and will be; fate records
Our secrets in her stolen tapestries.
Hung as an offering to heathen gods,
The well of history is scant and dry—
The bucket weighs more than the water does,
Yet every handful of its lighted store
Will echo for eternity, will shine
Even in days when none are there to hear.

The translators sat there a while,
They thought in tender choirs and Hallelujahs,
Pondering the meaning of it all,
Each sat to work, produced a different scroll,
In his own native tongue, so all could read.

But then they found that each
Had translated the text a different way,
And rose in argument: they fought alone,
With unembellished words, and spoke alone,
The ancient scrolls untouched, upon the sand.


1,053 posted on 11/12/2006 1:16:19 PM PST by WL Mantis (Eppur, Se Mueve!)
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