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My script will have some VERY emotional scenes in it:: the tagline might be "Bring a lot of tissues, you WILL need them!!" I have some parts, that will cause watery eyes on all but the most jaded people, in my opinion. (one part, is the Scene where the Angel intervenes, saving Dr. Smithson from his suicide jump, and then , after asking him to give up all of his bitterness against God, the Angel alerts Dr. Smithson that there is something that everyone has missed regarding the doomsday complex and the computer controlling it, Omni-one, that will allow it to be destroyed. The angel then lets Dr. Smithson know that God will show Mankind this weakness,and that he will be involved in the plan to use this weakness to attempt to stop omni-one, along with his fiance, Dr. Royce.

Another watery-eye scene will be where, in route to the final assault on omni-one and the doomsday complex, Thousands of people gather on each side of the highway, with signs of support, and such, and form a human chain of support, for the caravan of vehicles heading to the doomsday complex to stop Omni-One.

BTW-- in my story, the two main characters, Dr.s Smithson and Royce, have made a vow, to God and each other, of sexual purity, until their wedding night. Just one of the many positive messages in my story.

Very cool!

Mine will be that way too. The battle scenes are very dark and intense. While the space battles are more of an adrenaline rush, the ground combat has a much more personal feel to it.

Mine will have angels/spirits too, belive it or not. Miya's psionic powers stem directly from wthin her, her soul. There will be an actual out-of-body experience and that is where she gets key information to stop the threat.

One of the most tearful scenes is when the Shadow Force gets its order to fire at the Marines. Miya senses it during a particularly nasty battle, senses these guys, implanted into every platoon, just waiting for their order. But no one belives her until it is too late when the platoon leader is shot by this guy. What makes this scene sad is that it becomes personal. Krige happened to be the brother of this agent and until this point they were inseperable. They go from family to fighting eachother to the death. It is followed by scenes of other Marines fighting and dying against their own at the same time they are fighting the enemy. Each chapter has sub-sections. This section is simply called "Betrayal."

BTW-- in my story, the two main characters, Dr.s Smithson and Royce, have made a vow, to God and each other, of sexual purity, until their wedding night. Just one of the many positive messages in my story.

Very cool :)

My script will have some VERY emotional scenes in it:: the tagline might be "Bring a lot of tissues, you WILL need them!!" I have some parts, that will cause watery eyes on all but the most jaded people, in my opinion. (one part, is the Scene where the Angel intervenes, saving Dr. Smithson from his suicide jump, and then , after asking him to give up all of his bitterness against God, the Angel alerts Dr. Smithson that there is something that everyone has missed regarding the doomsday complex and the computer controlling it, Omni-one, that will allow it to be destroyed. The angel then lets Dr. Smithson know that God will show Mankind this weakness,and that he will be involved in the plan to use this weakness to attempt to stop omni-one, along with his fiance, Dr. Royce.

Another watery-eye scene will be where, in route to the final assault on omni-one and the doomsday complex, Thousands of people gather on each side of the highway, with signs of support, and such, and form a human chain of support, for the caravan of vehicles heading to the doomsday complex to stop Omni-One.

BTW-- in my story, the two main characters, Dr.s Smithson and Royce, have made a vow, to God and each other, of sexual purity, until their wedding night. Just one of the many positive messages in my story.

Well, many writers use their stories as vehicles to pass along their views on things as well as what is right and wrong. My co-worker is working on a story that centers on vampires to where one of the underlying themes is personal responsibility and the consequences of one's own action. Beyond that, I don't know much about it. I try to do the same in my RPG games as well at times have situation to where the players might have to make a choice between the lesser of the two evils since life isn't so cut and dry but still must do the right things for the good of all.