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To: bentfeather

Christmas continues...

I see thee, little child in your mother's lap.
In you the impossible has come to be,
Creator enters creation and takes a nap
As mother you did make sings lullaby to thee.


(I wrote that as an exercise in writing a 4 line stanza, but it wants to be longer. Something to work on later!)


799 posted on 12/27/2005 7:59:08 AM PST by Knitting A Conundrum (Act Justly, Love Mercy, and Walk Humbly With God Micah 6:8)
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To: Knitting A Conundrum

Oh structured poetry. Yikes. I am a rebel. Free Verse for me.


Bravo for you to do this. I just loose it when I try.


800 posted on 12/27/2005 8:02:09 AM PST by Soaring Feather
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