Nope, that's got too many verses, not enough syllables per line, and too much repition - wouldn't qualify as a hymn under the old definition. Might get in through the praise band section but that's iffy. Maybe get the worship team to do it during the offeratory.
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Listening to Sam Cooke when he sang for the Soul Stirrers. A capella, four-part harmony, and absolutely beautiful.