To: RosieCotton
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We should compare whose obsessing is worse. At least your guy isn't trying to be Mr. Perfect. My male lead is supposed to be snarky, for cryin' out loud, but he's acting like the love interest in a Jane Austen novel! Honestly!
2,191 posted on
11/16/2004 7:13:32 PM PST by
JenB
To: JenB
I need to give him faults, though. So far he IS Mr. Perfect. Heck, I even have him mowing the lawn of an elderly neighbor. His main fault is that he's overly extroverted.
But then...making him more imperfect might actually make him MORE appealing. So maybe that's a bad idea.
2,193 posted on
11/16/2004 7:19:27 PM PST by
RosieCotton
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