I got to work on it some at work. Stupid turbo died and I couldn't run my samples. Now I can't decide where to go with the plot next. I could have the cat kill the toaster ...maybe at the end of the story. I think the toaster is going to be an appliances' rights activist. :)
You're really going to have to post your story, you know...
Chapter 2 is done, Chapter 3 well started.