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The Hobbit Hole XVII - A new road or a secret gate...
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Posted on 11/03/2004 6:16:42 PM PST by HairOfTheDog

Welcome to The Hobbit Hole!

A new road or a secret gate...

New verse:

Upon the hearth the fire is red,
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet,
Still round the corner we may meet
A sudden tree or standing stone
That none have seen but we alone.
Tree and flower and leaf and grass,
Let them pass! Let them pass!
Hill and water under sky,
Pass them by! Pass them by!

Still round the corner there may wait
A new road or a secret gate,
And though we pass them by today,
Tomorrow we may come this way
And take the hidden paths that run
Towards the Moon or to the Sun.
Apple, thorn, and nut and sloe,
Let them go! Let them go!
Sand and stone and pool and dell,
Fare you well! Fare you well!

Home is behind, the world ahead,
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadows to the edge of night,
Until the stars are all alight.
Then world behind and home ahead,
We’ll wander back to home and bed.
Mist and twilight, cloud and shade,
Away shall fade! Away shall fade!
Fire and lamp, and meat and bread,
And then to bed! And then to bed!

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To: HairOfTheDog
Gotta sign out now, my time is up. Hope to see ya guys again soon.

Steve

3,081 posted on 11/22/2004 11:08:05 AM PST by smaagee
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To: smaagee

See ya :~D


3,082 posted on 11/22/2004 11:09:35 AM PST by HairOfTheDog (<<<loves her hubbit and the horse he rode in on :~D)
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To: The Flying Dutchman; Corin Stormhands

Yes - and what did you think of it?


3,083 posted on 11/22/2004 11:10:52 AM PST by HairOfTheDog (<<<loves her hubbit and the horse he rode in on :~D)
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To: Corin Stormhands

I love the charge of the Rohirim. I think that's about my favorite part.

Gosh...get chills just thinking about it!

I can't wait for the EE! I haven't bought the movie since I'm waiting for that. Whether I can afford it when it actually comes out may be another matter, but eventually...


3,084 posted on 11/22/2004 11:13:40 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

More Faramir in the EE... mmm...


3,085 posted on 11/22/2004 11:18:21 AM PST by JenB
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To: RosieCotton; JenB
It sounds like really forcing the writing process does not give you time to refine the plot into a likable form.

Y'all are almost done and I have not even decided on a topic for that paper that is due next Friday :P What annoys me is that I could easily fill up 10 pages if I did not have to cite sources.
3,086 posted on 11/22/2004 11:20:25 AM PST by TalonDJ
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To: TalonDJ

No, forcing yourself to keep to a writing schedule keeps you from falling into the "I don't feel like writing" or "I really need to edit what I've got" traps. I almost always hate my story from the halfway point to the three-quarter mark, NaNo or no. (There's a joke about the progression of "my wonderful story" to "my current story" to "my story" to "my @#%@#$@# story" to "my wonderful finished story" that's very true...)

My ten-page research report due next Friday is going not too badly. I've got the introduction almost finished and now I need to invent some conclusions and then make the data support it... oh, is that not what you're supposed to do?


3,087 posted on 11/22/2004 11:27:22 AM PST by JenB
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To: RosieCotton

It's either that or Aragon's speech at the gates.


3,088 posted on 11/22/2004 11:27:42 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (All I want for Christmas is a red Swingline stapler...)
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To: JenB

That is probably what I will do. As soon as I select a topic. I am thinking 'why I should have gotten full credit on assignment 1'.

No really.... a paper on why the way I worked the analysis is the better way than the way he graded it. The only problem with that topic is the math to back it up will make the paper take more work than some other topic. To bad all the stuff at work is proprietary so I can't write about any of that.


3,089 posted on 11/22/2004 11:30:56 AM PST by TalonDJ
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To: Corin Stormhands

That one is better for quotes...but doesn't affect me in quite the same way. But still...one of the great scenes in movie history, IMO.

Not that I'm biased...


3,090 posted on 11/22/2004 11:35:49 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: TalonDJ

Heh, I think you should go for it, math or no!


3,091 posted on 11/22/2004 11:37:06 AM PST by JenB
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To: JenB; TalonDJ
There's a joke about the progression of "my wonderful story" to "my current story" to "my story" to "my @#%@#$@# story" to "my wonderful finished story" that's very true...

Yep, that's about it. And most of the time, I give up at step 4. ;-) NaNo has been good for me in that it forces me to work past that point...or through it, in any case. I don't really have anything that's finished in the way I'd like it to be, but as I read somewhere the other day, what's "good" about a good first draft is that it's done! That's the most important part, and often very, very hard to achieve.

3,092 posted on 11/22/2004 11:38:21 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Doubly so for me. I just lose interest about 3/4 of the way in, most of the time.


3,093 posted on 11/22/2004 11:42:16 AM PST by JenB
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To: RosieCotton

I drop off at step 0.6

Between the 'over thought the plot' and started writing something.


3,094 posted on 11/22/2004 11:49:25 AM PST by TalonDJ
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To: TalonDJ

Well...if'n ya think of any really wonderful plots, pass 'em over! ;-)

I'm not good at that part...


3,095 posted on 11/22/2004 11:52:10 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

I have been getting better at constructing elaborate settings and premises but not at writing. Thinking the stuff up I love doing. Writing it down I get bored and stop. Since I learned to focus on 'feel' and character transitions I think I have gotten better at coming up with stuff. I have a couple plots that I need to adapt to not be fanfiction and a few that only need some pen going on paper to get them going. It would take me a while to explain any of them though. My two best ones are specifically designed to keep the reader guessing for awhile as the grand picture slow gets revealed.


3,096 posted on 11/22/2004 12:03:30 PM PST by TalonDJ
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To: no one in particular
The perfect 18th Wedding Anniversary Gift...Porcelein and flowers...


3,097 posted on 11/22/2004 12:28:23 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (All I want for Christmas is a red Swingline stapler...)
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To: TalonDJ

I get bored writing things down, too. I already know the story anyway, after all...

My plotting is getting better. I don't telegraph all my punches eight chapters out now.


3,098 posted on 11/22/2004 12:28:58 PM PST by JenB
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To: Corin Stormhands

If we were ever in doubt, I think this would prove: Corin's a dwarf.


3,099 posted on 11/22/2004 12:29:22 PM PST by JenB
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To: JenB

mine?


3,100 posted on 11/22/2004 12:29:39 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (All I want for Christmas is a red Swingline stapler...)
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