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The Hobbit Hole XV - Pass them by! Pass them by!
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Posted on 09/02/2004 2:18:28 PM PDT by HairOfTheDog

Welcome to The Hobbit Hole!

...Pass them by! Pass them by!

New verse:

Upon the hearth the fire is red,
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet,
Still round the corner we may meet
A sudden tree or standing stone
That none have seen but we alone.
Tree and flower and leaf and grass,
Let them pass! Let them pass!
Hill and water under sky,
Pass them by! Pass them by!

Still round the corner there may wait
A new road or a secret gate,
And though we pass them by today,
Tomorrow we may come this way
And take the hidden paths that run
Towards the Moon or to the Sun.
Apple, thorn, and nut and sloe,
Let them go! Let them go!
Sand and stone and pool and dell,
Fare you well! Fare you well!

Home is behind, the world ahead,
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadows to the edge of night,
Until the stars are all alight.
Then world behind and home ahead,
We’ll wander back to home and bed.
Mist and twilight, cloud and shade,
Away shall fade! Away shall fade!
Fire and lamp, and meat and bread,
And then to bed! And then to bed!

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To: RosieCotton

Psuedo fantasy?


3,941 posted on 09/22/2004 8:27:03 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB

Some form of fantasy, I mean. Probably a realistic world with some fantastic elements.

I dunno. I really don't have a scrap of an idea this time around.


3,942 posted on 09/22/2004 8:29:46 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Heh, my world is something like that. I'd call it "magic realism" but that describes a bizzare South American subgenre...

See if you can create a character you'd like to tell a story about, then.


3,943 posted on 09/22/2004 8:30:40 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB; RosieCotton; HairOfTheDog; RMDupree; g'nad; 2Jedismom; SuziQ; All

~Sigh~ The Season Premiere of "Corin's World" continues...

- Nobody bothered to tell me that "The Toy Maker of Williamsburg" is no longer there...

- Then the bank says that the proceeds from the sale of the kidney will be held for five days 'cause they're drawn on an out of state bank (It was flippin Bank of America fercryinoutloud)...I did manage to get the manager to override that...

- THEN I went to another department to pick up something I have to send to a meeting tomorrow. Apparently my security card access has been shut off for their office (works for mine). I set off all the alarms...

Can I leave yet?


3,944 posted on 09/22/2004 9:17:24 AM PDT by Corin Stormhands (John FORGE Kerry is RONG for America...)
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To: JenB

I'll do that! Thanks for the tips.

My main trouble is that whatever I write tends to be heavily influenced by what I've read recently...which makes me feel hopelessly unoriginal. And then I feel like giving up.

I suppose there's nothing new under the sun, and there's no getting out of writing things that are similar to at least some of what I've read, so I shouldn't let it get to me!

I think we quilled the thread...


3,945 posted on 09/22/2004 9:17:39 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: Corin Stormhands

LOL!

You do have an interesting life! I guess there's something to be said for that.

On the other hand, there's something to be said for boring lives, too...


3,946 posted on 09/22/2004 9:19:23 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

I have the same problem! Also what I watch. I have to fight to keep other people's characters out of my stories.

All you have to do is plagiarize from enough sources that no one can really decide who you're plagiarizing.


3,947 posted on 09/22/2004 9:24:49 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB

I should read some very very good books until November, so I have nice characters to steal!

Hm...maybe I should dig out some of the Dickens books I haven't read in awhile. I love his descriptions...


3,948 posted on 09/22/2004 9:41:33 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Good plan!

I guess I'm lucky... I can usually spin out a plot easily enough. It's the writing that's hard for me.


3,949 posted on 09/22/2004 9:55:05 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB

I think I was born with a deficient imagination.


3,950 posted on 09/22/2004 9:58:36 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: Corin Stormhands
Shoes of Power...


3,951 posted on 09/22/2004 10:06:36 AM PDT by Professional Engineer (Grand Poobah~Benevolent & Protective Order of Irascible Fellows. That's right, I'm a Curmudgeon.)
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To: RosieCotton

No, you're just not as weird and twisted as I am.

But there are ways we can make up for that deficiency ;-) So you want to write something slightly fantastic - like a story about ordinary people who suddenly discover a magic charm? Something along those lines?

Try "writing what you know" just a little bit. How about some of your characters are musicians? Or homeschool graduates? Or techies?


3,952 posted on 09/22/2004 10:09:45 AM PDT by JenB
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To: Professional Engineer; HairOfTheDog; RMDupree; 2Jedismom; JenB; RosieCotton

Yeah, I ~could~ say all of this is because I don't have the one shoooooes...

But that would imply things were better when I ~did~ have them.


3,953 posted on 09/22/2004 10:22:53 AM PDT by Corin Stormhands (John FORGE Kerry is RONG for America...)
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To: JenB
So you want to write something slightly fantastic - like a story about ordinary people who suddenly discover a magic charm? Something along those lines?

Something along those lines, yeah.

*sigh* But see, this is where I get depressed, 'cause it's been done sooooo many times! And that shouldn't matter, but it makes me feel like I shouldn't bother.

3,954 posted on 09/22/2004 10:27:50 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Just because it's been done doesn't mean you shouldn't try to do it again. Do you know "Robinson Cruseo" spawned dozens of similar stories? There was even a name for them, "Robinsonades". It's been done forever. There is nothing new under the sun - but if you can find a slightly different angle on it...

And it hasn't been done *that* often. Now, if you were trying a Tolkien knock-off... that's been overdone.


3,955 posted on 09/22/2004 10:30:31 AM PDT by JenB
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To: Corin Stormhands
Maybe they must be destroyed before all the evil will go out of our world...

Them and the toaster of doooooom.

3,956 posted on 09/22/2004 10:31:22 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: Corin Stormhands
The Season Premiere of "Corin's World" continues...

so... the daily rectal exams just weren't enuff fer yuh, huh?...

3,957 posted on 09/22/2004 10:32:05 AM PDT by g'nad (Ramadi delende est...)
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To: Corin Stormhands; HairOfTheDog; RMDupree; 2Jedismom; JenB; RosieCotton; osagebowman

headin' out purty quick tuh pick grapes at a neighbors... just found out that we have a neighbor to the North (about 6 miles as the crow flies, 15 miles by dirt road) that is a retired Marine officer... met him the other day, and I took thegirl over fer a visit on Monday... great spread... he's got a couple dozen Hopewell Indian burial mounds on his place..., and a high bluff with a view to the West to die for... he and his wife are real nice folks...


3,958 posted on 09/22/2004 10:39:58 AM PDT by g'nad (Ramadi delende est...)
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To: g'nad

Whatcha gonna do with the grapes?

Congrats on the newly found neighbor!


3,959 posted on 09/22/2004 10:42:52 AM PDT by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: g'nad

Hmmm, former Marines, rural hideouts,

Y'all know something yer not sharing?


3,960 posted on 09/22/2004 10:49:13 AM PDT by Professional Engineer (Grand Poobah~Benevolent & Protective Order of Irascible Fellows. That's right, I'm a Curmudgeon.)
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