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To: Victoria Delsoul; JustAmy; tuliptree76

Okay, here's the latest song I'm working on.

Here's the story: I was on an extended business trip to the Georgia coast, and I had to go to Walmart to get some things. It was dark, and a chilly ocean breeze sprayed salt through the air. A light rain was falling, and, as is my habit, I had my truck windows open to enjoy nature as much as I could. I passed the local mall on the way, and in the dark, through the rain, I saw the neon lights of a cheap carnival - the kind with a dozen or so rides, hard-voiced carnie barkers, and sticky-faced children. Somehow, the scene was frightening in a spiritual sense, as if something Dark was alive in the rides, waiting to pull me in. I could almost hear the low, raspy voice, saying "C'mon, boy, step inside... What? Are you..... afraid?" and drawing out the last word like a blade sliding along bone.

So, thoroughly invested with the heebie-jeebies, I shook it off as best I could and made my way to WallyWorld. When I got back to my hotel that night, I wrote these lines:

CARNIVAL*

Carnival
A place where a man can hide
Beneath the garish lights
Selling your soul one piece at a time

Carnival
Is it just an arcane ride
Promises delights
Sell your soul at the carnival

Carnival
Lights in a rain swept night



I'm working on the music. I hope to have it all written by the end of the week, and be done recording by Sunday. We'll see - and y'all will be the first to hear :)

*Words and music by Tragically Single


162 posted on 06/16/2004 5:53:48 PM PDT by Terabitten (Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of All Who Threaten It)
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To: Tragically Single

Wow...gives me goosebumps just reading it. Looking forward to the song.


163 posted on 06/16/2004 6:06:09 PM PDT by Victoria Delsoul (Liberalism is motivated by the selfish interest of the few to the detriment of the many)
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To: Tragically Single

I'm looking forward to hearing the song.


175 posted on 06/16/2004 7:57:55 PM PDT by tuliptree76
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To: Tragically Single

Please remember to ping me when you post your song!


200 posted on 06/17/2004 5:31:08 AM PDT by Jen
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To: Tragically Single

Sounds good.

Looking forward to hearing it.


210 posted on 06/17/2004 6:54:31 AM PDT by JustAmy (Bush - Cheney in '04 ........ ChaChaCha)
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