Posted on 11/24/2003 9:52:48 AM PST by January24th
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some
times
she
just
sighs
pragmatists
don't hear
the sunrise
what night
is enjoyed
without
the illusion
of diamonds
what sunset
separates
the truth
and us
He sinks
into his
sunset surround
more moment than
tomorow
less permanent
than a green sky.
the beat of samba
sublimates carnival
to the penitence
of wednesday
flagelados only
understand half
of the equation
la rumba
a dance of desire
never regretted
never better
than when you
stepped forward
into my circle
raised my hand above my head
and bid me promenade
the small orbit of
of my world
Like the sun
you smiled approvingly
and drew me close
and so we journey
sun and moon
in the elliptical
course of our universe
music felt and played
never leaves the universe
but rings forever.
Self parody #1 (metaphysics)
The heart of the matter
is that truth is
not what coincides
with what we want
or otherwise
nor is taken from a chart
or map that exchanges
itineraries or fares
for destinations
or seats us for an experience
without having our tickets taken
for its borders unsought
untried, will still the traveler
shape and ply, and mark
with stops along the way
regardless if we sleep or wake
So we are wearied, stamped
travel stained
with all we loose
all we gain, and whether
it is understood it moves us ever
where it would. tho longing never
makes it clear, the stop we seek
around the curve, it is the where
that is the when of knowing
it if we are there.
Neither created nor destroyed
it binds us even as we rearrange
the forms we raise against its
guides that remain fixed
tho we are changed
#830 I meant for all.
Or maybe the metaphor of condums?
such a stately lass
some enchantments never last
fijords in the spring
tarayza's exuberant
expostulations
uncontained,
unconstrained
effusive
practicing
unsafe rhetoric
uncondemed
protected by
disposable income
bwahahahahaha
RE: Self Parody
This poem has such a nice cadence to it, different from many of your other writings. It brings a mood that surpasses just the words. Very nice!
another
starry night
without
left wanting
right waiting
forward-side-step-back
static footprints
of formality...
some call it dancing.
laughing eyes sparkling
soft hips orbiting
centered on an idea
of rythmn and joy...
some call it life.
"red, red wine
goes to my head
makes me forget
things I knew"
like Portugal
in August
indifferent heat
suited the days of
canteloupe-water respites
and benevolent rain
when it pleased
and we were pleased
to dream...
red, red wine
sends me to bed
with an aching head
for things I do...
I'll be fine.
:o)
why should
midnight
divide
provide
decide
the consequence
of loving you
today
but parted
from you
tomorrow
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