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To: bentfeather; snippy_about_it
The Unseen

Fog and mist enshroud the stars
The lights that illuminate my way

Before, I found it beautiful
Swirling tapestries dancing in the darkness

But now, they are cold, wet obstacles
As quicksand placed between my heart and goal

Formless, yet made of steel
Shapeless, yet aching reminders

When sleep comes, the apparition fades
The sun shines brightly, and she I love

Is with me, at my side, and I remember
The smile, the joy, the happy heart

Now gone, and God knows where
And daybreak brings return of bitter things

I do not wish this.

I wonder, how can man turn back a clock
To when such sadness dared not show its face

Knowing I cannot, I must move on
The fog’s cool touch reminds me

That someday, my wish will come true
If I but wait … and wait … and wait.

598 posted on 11/20/2003 10:35:30 AM PST by Colonel_Flagg ("The difference between a violin and a viola is that a viola burns longer." -- Victor Borge)
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To: Colonel_Flagg
I like it!
600 posted on 11/20/2003 10:38:12 AM PST by Darksheare (You think I'm innocent, not wild. Take me and see how much I'm tamed.)
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To: Colonel_Flagg
There you are. LOL.

I like it! Sad but there is a sweetness to it too.

Thank you so much for sharing it with us. :)
605 posted on 11/20/2003 10:54:11 AM PST by snippy_about_it (Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
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To: Colonel_Flagg; snippy_about_it; SAMWolf; Darksheare; Flurry; radu
Riding Horses

Riding Horses
I do not dare
such mighty
animals full
of power do scare

I love to look at them
with awe and often
wish I had the gall
to climb
on ones back
sit very tall
and
ride the winds above
the noise
to sit there
very poised
and show
nay, I'm not
afraid of
you at all.

bentfeather
a/k/a MHL
Copyright © 2002
All Rights Reserved


612 posted on 11/20/2003 11:02:41 AM PST by Soaring Feather (I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather)
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To: Colonel_Flagg
Thank you Colonel, I like this work very much.

Your images are very rich.
613 posted on 11/20/2003 11:04:12 AM PST by Soaring Feather (I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather)
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To: Colonel_Flagg
Darn. Everyone writes poetry but me! Nice Colonel_Flagg.
642 posted on 11/20/2003 3:58:53 PM PST by SAMWolf (100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
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