This is a test I've been awol as family caregiving responsibilities grew more intense over the last 15 years. Constructive criticism always appreciated.
To: Fearless Flyers
Excellent essay. Well done.
To: Fearless Flyers
It’s not “dehumanizing” until somebody takes it that personally.
3 posted on
10/03/2020 1:21:29 PM PDT by
equaviator
(If it seems like it's too bad to be true then maybe it isn't.)
To: Fearless Flyers
Very good points.
You should work on your sentence structure and your use of commas.
- I hope that’s constructive. ;)
4 posted on
10/03/2020 1:28:33 PM PDT by
MV=PY
(The Magic Question: Who's paying for it?)
To: Fearless Flyers
A well reasoned short statement. Some work on the grammar and sentence structure would be welcome, for example: the difference between your and you’re.
The mnemonic cues I use for that sort of confusion is:
You’re taking your stuff.
They’re taking their stuff over there.
6 posted on
10/03/2020 7:57:31 PM PDT by
Don W
(When blacks riot, neighbourhoods and cities burn. When whites riot, nations and continents burn.)
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