To: 2ndDivisionVet
It's hard to figure out what to think wading through this mess.
The writer can't even figure out if they want to talk in the past tense or present tense, often mixing them in the same sentence.
I teach my 2nd graders how to write better than this....
43 posted on
02/07/2012 4:23:53 AM PST by
CAluvdubya
(Prayers for Newt to prevail over the enemy from within....)
To: CAluvdubya
The writer can't even figure out if they want to talk in the past tense or present tense, often mixing them in the same sentence.
I teach my 2nd graders how to write better than this....
You do teach them about having agreement between a singular noun and a pronoun referring to it, right?
56 posted on
02/07/2012 6:07:59 AM PST by
aruanan
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